Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hi Heather! I am Patricia C.‚ and I will be your e-structor for your essay about the metamorphosis of a butterfly. First of
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instrument of power into design methodologies‚ in tandem with other government entities‚ focused on solving wicked problems is the overall objective of the military arm of government. Scrutinizing policy objectives with creative thinking and ongoing analysis in order to continually frame the problem and develop/revise plans that will apply the best possible doctrine at the highest levels is the intent. Military planners for Operation IRAQI FREEDOM (OIF)‚ the 2003 U.S. military action against Iraq‚ allowed
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Narrative Essay All of us tell stories about things that have happened to us. Have you ever been "almost" hit by another car and then you rushed home to relate this story to your husband or wife? Have you ever had a bizarre experience‚ such as being mistaken for someone else? Or perhaps you were wrongfully accused of shoplifting one time. Did you ever help someone in a time of need or vice-a-versa? You probably told these stories to someone‚ didn’t you? Many events happen in our lives that we brush
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Cops and Robbers Gone Wrong Elementary school kids love to play various games during their snack and lunch breaks after class. In the third grade tag games were the hot thing to do during recess. Personally I hated playing tag games because I was never the fastest girls‚ and I always seemed to end up getting tagged. I was “it” for hours! One day my friends and I decided to switch up our usual routine of playing tag and chose to play Cops and Robbers instead. As fun and easy as that sounds‚ to
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Narrative Analysis Paper Introduction In this paper‚ I perform a narrative analysis on an “oral narrative of personal experience”(Labov‚ 2011). As follows‚ Section 1 discusses the methodology used to perform the analysis‚ Section 2 discusses the structure of the narrative and presents the results of the analysis‚ and Section 3 concludes with a summary of the narrative and analyses. Section 1: Methodology For this analysis‚ I used a personal experience that is termed an elicited narrative
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college knowing the fundamentals of how to write an essay‚ yet I never knew what writing processes would work best for me. A writing process is a routine that helps writers become more effective and has procedures that vary amongst each individual. To incorporate a process to develop essays was my goal‚ so that is why I researched different procedures that would work best for me. Although many people struggle in developing an essay‚ writing an essay is simple when applying the correct methods. I found
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The process of writing an academic essay Academic writing is a formal writing. The main aim of academic writing is to inform and not entertain like creative writing. Both academic writer and academic readers have no time to be entertained but they rush for useful information they are looking for. Academic writing is often described as complex and abstract. Writing is a process
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When it comes to writing essays I blank out a lot and I think to myself‚ “what should I do?” I’m not the type of person that likes to do essays because I struggle with having to write them. The only way I would be able to write one was if I have had any experience with that particular topic. My writing process is not so much of a “thinking outside the box” sort of thing. It’s really simple‚ but I struggle with it. I begin with writing everything on a piece of paper that comes from the back of
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In nearly all colleges and universities‚ students will be required to write at least one term paper or essay in their college career. Many of these colleges have a specific way in which they require students to present the information learned. At Bethel University‚ students are required to use APA formatting when writing papers. I have learned there are four steps in the APA writing process. These steps include beginning with a thesis‚ giving evidential support to the thesis‚ connecting the evidence
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Ever heard of the expression “love hurts”‚ it really does. What is love? To me Love is something you can’t live without it or with it. Love is something that gets you hyped up when you look at special someone‚ it’s something that makes butterflies fly in your stomach when you talk to talk to that special someone‚ it’s the last thing you think about before going to bed. Have I have been love? Of course I have. It was a dark morning‚ so quiet you can hear pin drop‚ it was the first day of summer
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