original essay‚ and the feedback that was given. After looking and reviewing all this information‚ I looked at the weakness in the essay. I started with the thesis statement. Even though the points of the thesis stayed the same‚ I tried to make it more argumentative. Therefore‚ I changed the wording and choice of words used. After focusing on the thesis‚ I then looked at the introduction. I copied my
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Running Head: CHILDHOOD OBESITY 1 Childhood Obesity‚ a Growing Concern Marjorie Student ENG122 Tiffany Professor January 17‚ 2011 CHILDHOOD OBESITY Childhood Obesity‚ a Growing Concern There are many differences between children today and children 20 years ago. One area that is concerning‚ not only to researchers and politicians‚ but parents as well‚ is the increase in childhood obesity‚ which is reaching epidemic proportions. According to the National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey
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Child obesity has been steady on the rise. Is it child obesity or a form of child abuse? There are instances that children become overweight due to health issues‚ medicines‚ or genetics. However‚ more often than not parents are a major contributing factor. Society is in such a rush to get things done in our hectic lives that we tend to shove our kids in front of the television with a fast food‚ sugary sodas‚ and fattening snacks. Considering the side effects of obesity‚ are we being abusive
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Obesity prevention intervention program: Few intervention studies exist for preventing obesity in children and most were conducted in western countries‚ school based and the interventions were based on a health-education or social-cognitive model framework. Sharjah Education council (SEC) focused on obesity at government schools. Combating of obesity program is started since 2012 which called (Generations without obesity) and great effort is running to decrease the obesity rate at schools. Generations
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Child obesity is a problem in today’s society. Another problem in today’s society is parent-child relationships. A recent study showed that these two problems may be linked. In this chapter we learned of three different types of parenting. They are authoritarian‚ having complete control over a child without thinking of one’s feelings‚ permissive‚ not really caring what your child does either way‚ and authoritative‚ making the rules known while still thinking of your child. The study has shown that
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benefits of Surfing. Thesis Statement: Practicing Surfing has many health benefits. Question: What are the benefits of Surfing? Main Points: Improves health Improves energy Relieves stress Provides mental clarity. Helps with strength and agility. Step 3: Description of the audience: A group of college students Topic: Benefits of Surfing Specific Purpose: Inform the audience of the benefits of Surfing Thesis: Surfing has many health
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Outline I. Setting A) “The Lottery” by Shirley Jackson: The setting of Shirley Jackson’s “The Lottery” takes place June 27th on a warm‚ sunny day in a small town‚ between ten in the morning and noon‚ specifically in the village square between the post office and the bank. B) “The Destructors” by Graham Greene: The setting of Graham Greene’s “The Destructors” takes place in a post-war period in a London town‚ more specifically in a lot of an old man‚ Old Misery’s‚ home. II. Irony A) “The
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I. Cyber Bullying a. Use of computers‚ cell phones‚ social networking cites and other technology to threaten or humiliate others. b. Putting many young people at risk and sometimes even with deadly consequences c. Megan Meier’s suicide at age 13 II. Problem d. Internet availability is easy becoming so much easier e. Self-esteem is hurt and social skills begin to dwindle f. People may find it easier to say hurtful things online because there is little
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Topic: MRSA and You. General Purpose : To inform Specific Purpose: To inform the audience about the bacteria Methicillin-Resistant Staphylococcus Aureus. Thesis Statement: MRSA is an infection caused by a strain of Staphylococcus that has become resistant to antibiotics commonly used to treat staph infections. Preview Statement: Many of you have heard of MRSA‚ today im going to tell you exactly what type of bacteria it is and how to minimize your exposure to it. Introduction: Attention
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Judith Guerrero Professor Hoffman English 102 11 November 2014 Obesity: Who’s to blame? Obesity is increasing in the United States; it is more than a size and more than being overweight. Obesity is defined by Mayo Clinic in their Diseases and Conditions definitions as‚ “a complex disorder involving an excessive amount of body fat. Obesity isn ’t just a cosmetic concern. It increases risks of diseases and health problems such as heart disease‚ diabetes and high blood pressure.” Moreover
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