Elvin Martinez Error Response Paragraph 9/28/15 One of my errors in the first essay that I have always had trouble with is run-on sentences. A fused or run-on sentence is when two or more independent clauses are joined together without an appropriate punctuation or conjunction. There are at least four ways to correct a run-on sentence. The first way is to separate them into two different sentences by putting a period at the end of the first subject and the verb group. After which‚ you capitalize
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The Long walk Mariah Martinez The Long Walk of the Navajo‚ or also known as the Long Walk to Bosque Redondo which was a deportation of the Navajo people from their reservations in 1864 from what is today’s Arizona and New Mexico by the United Stated Government to be forced walk to Bosque Redondo. The Navajos were aggressively moved from place to place at gunpoint from the United States soldiers and even their homes were being raided leaving behind cattle‚ land‚ and their personal belongings . Threw
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A Literary Analysis on “Mother Tongue” By Demetria Martinez “His nation chewed him up and spat him out like a pinon shell‚ and when he emerged from an airplane one late afternoon‚ I knew I would one day make love with him” (Martinez‚ 3). And so it starts‚ the story of a nineteen year old Mexican- American girl named Mary (Maria; as he only chooses to call her)‚ who helps out and eventually falls in love with Jose Luis Alegria‚ a Salvadoran refugee. Martínez’s story of María is told against
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Uniroyal Goodrich Tire Co. v. Martinez Briefly explain the opinion. Which of Martinez’s claims were successful and which were not? Why (what was the court’s legal explanation)? In this case‚ Martinez brought forward three claims. First‚ he claimed strict product liability based on defective design of the tire. Martinez also claimed negligence and gross negligence. In their ruling‚ the jury found that the defective design of the tire contributed towards the Martinez injuries. The jury did not find
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Martinez recalled asking Sara out a couple times. He asked her if she wanted to go to happy hour‚ along with asking other co-workers. At first‚ Martinez did not recall ever specifically going out socially with just him and Sara. Next‚ he remembered that Sara and himself went out a couple of times alone without co-workers. Martinez recalled that him and Sara went on a date was after his promotion to Site Foreman around October or November 2011. Martinez mentioned the second date with Sara was a
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OPERATIVE REPORT Patient Name: Putul Barua Patient ID: 135799 Room: CCU4 Date of Surgery: 01/08/2013 Admitting Physician: Dr. Simon Williams‚ MD Pulmonology Surgeon: Dr. Simon Williams‚ MD Pulmonology Preoperative Diagnosis: Recent onset hemoptysis‚ history of tuberculosis. Postoperative Diagnosis: No tuberculosis lesions seen. Operative Procedure: Bronchoscopy. Specimens Removed: Blood clots. Indications: Patient requires bronchoscopy because of recent onset hemoptysis and a
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Pain is a subjective experience and unpleasant sensation that associated with tissue impairment (Ogino et al.‚ 2007). Post-operative pain is a commonly actual post-operative complication of most general surgeries (Abdalrahim et al.‚ 2011). Therefore‚ Evelyn is likely to have pain due to the surgical tissue trauma and the replacement of the knee joint. Post-operative pain is a major concern during the recovery of patients because pain is a distressing symptom‚ poorly controlled pain may contribute
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“Your DNA Is an Abomination” written by Rudy Martinez. This article caused offense to many‚ and it was later defunded. John Samples‚ vice president at the Cato Institute‚ wrote an article in response to the article by Martinez. This article‚ “Is Hate Speech Protected by the First Amendment? What about this?” argues that regardless of a person’s view towards the article‚ Martinez had the right of the First Amendment to keep the article up. Rudy Martinez was not given the same support others have
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1. Co-op Bank started using activity based costing to allocate operating expenses to products and customers. The overall process is important to the ultimate success of the bank‚ so it needs to be logical and transparent. The bank’s project team came up with 3 questions for the activity-based costing: “How should it define resource pools? What activities should it define? Should it analyze costs by product or by customer?” These questions seem very logical in helping implement the activity based
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Mr. Sanchez-Martinez is a 30 year old individual‚ born and raised in Brooklyn‚ NY. He graduated from Christ the King High School in 2002. He continued his education at Dominican College‚ graduating in 2007 with an associates in Mathematics. He reported that he has worked in sales since high school and is currently working as a manager for Marketstar. Mr. Sanchez-Martinez sated that he has three sibling with whom he is close with. He indicated that his parents divorced when he was about four years
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