Public Speaking Online Preparation Outline Obesity in America Specific Purpose: At the end of my speech‚ the audience will be able to define obesity in America along with the contributing factors‚ health risks‚ and solutions or treatment of obesity. I. What are the contributing factors of obesity? a. The most common fact is due to the fact that people are eating more calories than they are burning. a.i. The CDC refers to this as “energy in balance”- to many calories in‚ too few calories burned
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Ms. Leathers‚ I had changed my thesis statement‚ but i did not know how to re-submit it to you. My new thesis statement is “The epic known as Beowulf‚ which had originally started as a traditional folk story‚ showed strong hero characteristics in the hero Beowulf.” In the Anglo-Saxon days‚ there was one story that showed the true meaning of being a hero. The epic known as Beowulf‚ which had originally started as a traditional folk story‚ showed strong hero characteristics in the hero Beowulf
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original essay‚ and the feedback that was given. After looking and reviewing all this information‚ I looked at the weakness in the essay. I started with the thesis statement. Even though the points of the thesis stayed the same‚ I tried to make it more argumentative. Therefore‚ I changed the wording and choice of words used. After focusing on the thesis‚ I then looked at the introduction. I copied my
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determined if the author has proven their thesis statement. The three essays I chose for my paper were “Childhood Obesity” by Janet Barnett‚ “Taking the “Rap” For Violence in Music” by Kerri Bennett‚
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I. Introduction A. Finding childcare can be hard and you may find yourself wondering how can childcare benefit your child. B. Thesis statement: Finding child care is important to me because childcare helps with language and social development‚ prepares children for future schooling‚ and is workforce support for parents. II. Body My first reason: Childcare helps with language and social development 1.More possibilities to connect with other children equals more chances to learn how to socialize
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Obesity‚ the sad condition brought about by the excessive indulgence of food consisting no nutritional value causes painful sights on the streets of our cities‚ which will soon become the norm of society. Not only does this parasite known as obesity create pity‚ but it is also linked to nearly the ninety chronic diseases most of which are fatal. I have been informed by a very knowing physician that since 1980 the rate of obesity in children and adolescents has almost
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Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God. Thesis Statement is: The thesis of Jonathan Edwards sermon tells as that those who have not accepted Jesus Christ as their Lord and personal savior are on the track which leads to hell. Edwards cites evidence that God at any point in time could throw those who have not gone through a religious changing situation or experienced an inward renewal down to hell. This being said leaves mankind helpless or with very little option‚ so we should yearn for him‚ get closer
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Topic: MRSA and You. General Purpose : To inform Specific Purpose: To inform the audience about the bacteria Methicillin-Resistant Staphylococcus Aureus. Thesis Statement: MRSA is an infection caused by a strain of Staphylococcus that has become resistant to antibiotics commonly used to treat staph infections. Preview Statement: Many of you have heard of MRSA‚ today im going to tell you exactly what type of bacteria it is and how to minimize your exposure to it. Introduction: Attention
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The thesis statement of the essay "The Clinic" is the last sentence of the second paragraph when the author writes‚"It gave the impression of more than the typical stomachache‚ and I plied ahead‚ waiting to finally ask the key question that slipped the knot on this mystery and sent the bacteria or virus or swallowed garden flower culprit plummeting into my lap." This statement demonstrates that the author is only troubled by the patient’s medical history instead of the most important information
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are found to have a shorter attention span‚ and adults have less face-to-face interactions because of technological advances. Technology has impacted toddlers in several ways: such as an increase in childhood obesity‚ less reading‚ and a decrease in social interaction with other kids. Childhood obesity is on the rise in the United States‚ and technology has played an important part in the increasing trend. Children are advised to get one hour of active play a day; instead they play on their tablets
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