Peer Evaluation Section: Giancarlos Casillas (Friend) 1. It’s clear the topic sentence but need to work a little bit on that. 2. Yes. 3. Yes. 4. Yes. 5. Yes. 6. No. 7. Yes. 8. If there are more sources that think the same of you. 9. It is a good paragraph and having this problem is situation that many young people are having and I understand you. I agree. José A. Nieves Morales (Friend) 1. Yes‚ I could identify the topic sentence. 2. Yes. 3. Yes it have. 4. Is ok but considered more clarity on words
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Five Paragraph Essay: Flo Hyman (Randi) I had one of the most common characteristics of my condition‚ but since it was so rare‚ no one could save me. I was born in Inglewood‚ California on July 29‚ 1954. I have 7 siblings‚ and I am the second oldest. I played basketball and ran track all four years of high school. I joined a youth team that went to Russia‚ and after that I knew that volleyball was my sport and not basketball. But you’ll learn more about that later. My dad‚ George is 6’1‚ he’s a railroad
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society Showing how the government portrays books and the lives of people who read books as bad‚ yet their lives are still better than the ones lives by the people in the society. Pathos Gadarene Swine Fallacy & Slippery Slope Fallacy Analytic Paragraph Explaining Meme: This meme shows two major messages throughout how the major use of technology as well as the deprivation of thinking‚ learning‚ books‚ and nature greatly affect a person negatively. The main goal of this meme is to try to make
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Paragraph 2: Adolf Hitler was one of the worst dictators in history. He killed over six million Jewish people in the holocaust because he believed that they were a threat to the supremacy of the Aryan race. Adolf Hitler’s steps to dictatorship began in the August of 1914 when he was accepted into the German army. When Germany was defeated in 1918 he was outraged‚ as a result he decided to continue working as an officer for the military. He was assigned as an intelligence officer for the German
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Slavery during the American Revolution to the Civil war and beyond. I. Slavery during the 1730’s through 1820’s. A. Antislavery movements 1730’s-1770’s B. Expansion of Slavery 1770’- 1820’s II. Slavery during the Confederacy A. Slavery as a Southern right B. Groups pushing for social change. III. Slavery and ethnic races A. Connections between Blacks and Native Americans B. Connections between the whites and Native Americans C. Civil War post racial
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Question 3 Discuss the relationship between the Scientific Revolution‚ the Enlightenment and the French Revolution. What do they have in common? How did they affect each other? The seventeenth century marked the beginnings of the scientific revolution in which scientists began to question the existence of the world and humanity as it was explained by church from a religious standpoint. Scientific inquiry and experimentation resulted in the development of a new way of thinking and looking at the
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The industrial revolution‚ a period of transition and innovation‚ inevitably brought with it changes. Life for both rich and poor was changed. The Industrial Revolution brought about the birth of two classes: The middle class and the working class. In the article “The Communist Manifesto” (1848) by Karl Marx‚ it states that “Marx saw the oppression of the worker by those who owned means of production.”(1) Did the Industrial Revolution benefit both‚ or yet cause grievance in one and be beneficial
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The French Revolution The American Revolution was not as revolutionary as the French Revolution. The French Revolution was mostly about having basic facilities and independence provided to all the people. All of this began because the monarch was not looking after his people properly. So the people wanted to remove the king from his position. This revolution was also about the people demanding for justice and equality‚ while the American Revolution was about driving the British away from their country
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The Haitian Revolution was one of the most successful slave revolutions of all time. During the period before the Haitian Revolution‚ Haiti was one of the richest countries in the Western Hemisphere: fueled by slave labor. Slaves were forced to work as long as the sun was up and they often spent all day chopping or hacking at sugar cane with a machete. If the slaves refused to work‚ they were shot or beaten. This upsets me because people of color were treated like lesser beings because of their skin
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World Studies 16 January 2014 The Same Revolution?: The Russian and Chinese Communist Revolution Many question the many similarities and differences between the Russian Revolution and the Chinese Communist Revolution and how they may have been the same historical rebellion. Using Crane Brinton’s Anatomy of a Revolution to compare and contrast the two revolutions’ stages‚ there might be an answer to the debatable question. While during the Russian Revolution‚ they started out united‚ a new government
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