Rubric for a Well-Written Paragraph Categories of Performance: Beginner (1) Basic (2) Intermediate (3) Advanced (4) Tone The tone is inappropriate for the writing purpose. The tone shifts from formal to informal and is not consistent. The tone shifts occasionally from formal to informal‚ or vice versa. The appropriate tone is used consistently. Opening sentence The sentence is incomplete and does not state the main idea. The sentence is complete‚ but does not state the main idea. The sentence
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Alyssa Petsinis ENG-1D1 Mrs. Kok March 23rd 2015 Comparison Paragraph between The Quiet American and Oryx and Crake. Throughout life there are people who thirst and hunger for power‚ and people who strive to survive off of it. Often people let power consume them creating selfish tendencies that may result in bringing chaos and suffering to the people around them. This behavior may cause destruction to the foundation of many societies all for the benefit of an individual’s selfish desires. In
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Flowers For Algernon Theme Paragraph In the realistic fiction‚ Flowers For Algernon‚ the author‚ Daniel Keyes‚ tried to convey the theme that a person shouldn’t change who they are for someone else. Charlie’s relationship with Alice represented this theme because one of the reasons Charlie signed up for the experiment was because he wanted to impress her. He thought if he became smarter‚ Alice would be proud of him‚ and he would be able to speak to her about smart-people stuff. Although she was
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COMPLETE THE PARAGRAPH WITH WORDS FROM THE BOX YOU SHOULD TAKE INTO ACCOUNT SEVERAL THINGS WHEN YOU ARE 1)...................... FOR A JOB. A GOOD LETTER OF 2)................ IS VERY IMPORTANT‚ AND DON’T FORGET TO ENCLOSE YOUR 3)........................SO THAT THE 4) ................KNOWS ABOUT YOUR 5).................... AND YOUR 6) ....................IF YOU HAVE AN 7).................... WITH THE PERSONNEL MANAGER‚ REMEMBER TO ASK ABOUT 8)................... AS WELL AS 9) ...........
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Fahrenheit 451 Analytical Paragraph By Claire Sylvester Happiness is false in Fahrenheit451; the government defines it and those who submit to society’s ways of happiness are not perturbed by reality. The government delivers to society frivolous entertainment giving them distractions from the grievances of reality. Beatty lectures Montag on why books are bad while he is at home faking sick: “If you don’t want a man unhappy politically‚ don’t give him two sides of a question to worry him; give
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Following is a sample outline of an argumentative essay (of 5 paragraphs) about whether street children are victims or criminals. OUTLINE Thesis Statement:- Street children are definitely victims of the society for social‚ financial‚ and psychological reasons. Body Paragraph 1: Street children are the result of family disintegration. A. The father deserts the family. 1. escapes from the family 2. marries again 3. dies B. Uneducated parents lack awareness
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Usher II Analysis Paragraph In “Usher II” the author provides examples of allusion in order for the readers to visualize the setting of the story. In the story Stendahl wasn’t happy with the government burning all the books down. When Mr. Bigelow came to see the house he said that he thought the government did was the right thing. Stendahl got mad at him and told him to get out of the house before something happens. “ Tweedledum following Tweedledee‚ Mock-Turtle‚ Dormouse‚ drowned bodies from
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Priya Rajkumar #12 8B Ms. Pasion Composition 16‚ February ‚ 2016 Body Paragraph # 1 (revised) One reason for why Hamlet‚ Prince of Denmark‚ is sane‚ is that his madness only manifests itself when he is in the presence of selective characters. Hamlet even says himself that he is only "mad in craft" [Shakespeare III.iv.188-199]. Hidden amongst the associates in question‚ exists his cowardly uncle‚ Claudius--the man responsible for the death of Hamlet’s father and Gertrude‚ his unfaithful mother
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Patrice Morris January 30‚ 2012 Com/156 Body Paragraphs Recycling and waste prevention are two very important ways to help address the issues of the environment concerning climate change. Recycling is a very beneficial factor that more individuals need to exercise in order to improve the environment’s pollution‚ reduce emissions of greenhouse gases‚ and save energy and natural resources that are used to produce products from virgin materials rather than from recycled materials‚ which uses less
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explain in the first sentence. Sometimes it’s explained in the first paragraph depending on the text. That is the reasoning used to choose the very first sentence which is deemed the introduction. After choosing the first sentences the other sentences were simply based off of the order in which the first sentence stated the various situational factors. After identifying the order‚ it was a matter of easy flowing in which the paragraph as a whole would make sense thus giving you
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