Self and Peer Editing Checklist Self Edit Yes/No Peer Edit Completed by ___________________________________ Yes/No & Comments Did I include an interesting hook to grab the reader’s attention? Did she include an interesting hook to grab the reader’s attention? Did I provide enough background information to let the reader know what/why this is an issue? Did she provide enough background information to let the reader know what/why this is an issue? Did I state a clear claim‚ that argues only one
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only means by which they feel normal. The drug becomes a crutch. Those with low self-esteem may use a drug to feel better about themselves. There can also be peer pressure that leads to drug abuse. Young people are impressionable and can succumb easily to this peer pressure and abuse drugs to fit in with the crowd or gain acceptance. Peer pressure is most powerful during our
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Peer Reviewed Articles Karen Quave PSY 325 Sasha Fleary June 10‚ 2013 The first article I chose is called “Case Study in Threats of Workplace Violence From a Non-Supervisory Basis. The case study explores ethical and legal issues concerning employees who bring weapons to work and the psychological effect of that on other employees (Taylor & Zeng). Another thing that is examined in this case study is peer bullying and threats of workplace violence. The accompanying literature of
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Travel Log Peer Evaluation I chose to do my peer evaluation on Jessica. Her speech really stood out to me above the others and that is why I chose to do my evaluation on her. Her speech was about her trip to the Rivera Maya. She started her speech with an awesome introduction explaining that the reason for her trip to the Rivera Maya was that she had just got married and was going on her honeymoon. The content of Jessica’s speech was very organized. She explained her trip chronology from the first
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secure job‚ you have no intention of leaving it any time soon. There are‚ however‚ certain situations that can put the idea of seeking a new job front and center in your mind. 1. Significant social gatherings with your peer group. Attending a social gathering where you’ll be among peers who are close in age and life experience can inspire a desire for change. For instance‚ you decide to attend your high school or college reunion. The reason you go is to catch up with old friends you knew back in the
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Dear Anna‚ In this letter I will be responding to a peer review you made on my personal narrative. I would like to begin by thanking you for reviewing my narrative and assisting me in improving it. You pointed out certain things I overlooked while completing my first draft and made some helpful suggestions. Throughout the letter I will be addressing the concerns and suggestions you made on my peer review. I will be addressing issues concerning the organization and structure‚ the introduction‚ thesis
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The peer teaching lesson I created was on graphing through problem solving in an inquiry-based environment. I had a broad idea of what I wanted to accomplish‚ and with the help of my professor‚ peers‚ and host teacher I was able to create the lesson that accomplished the concept I wanted to sharpen. My host teacher gave me some ideas to keep the students engaged‚ because she was afraid if there was a lot of wait time that the students would get out of hand. My professor gave me the idea of showing
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Why do you want this rank?: There’s many reasons why I would like to receive the rank of helper once again.. Firstly‚ the main reason why I’d like to achieve the rank of helper once again‚ is to make sure that everyone has a safe‚ and fun environment to spend their free time on! As a helper‚ with all my past experience I want to make sure that I can teach all of the new helpers to their best abilities‚ making sure that all punishments given are the correct ones! Secondly‚ I want to make sure that
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How HIPAA Violations Affect The Medical Billing Process HCR/220 September 23. 2012 How HIPAA Violations Affect The Medical Billing Process HIV and AIDS are two very serious diseases which first came known and reported in the U.S. in 1981. Today it is estimated that 1.7 million people in the U.S. have been infected with HIV since that date 619‚000 people have already died from it. The CDC‚ (Center For Disease Control) estimates that every one in five people living with HIV‚ are unaware that
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AIDS is a disease that damages the immune system and interferes with a person’s ability to fight off disease. It is most commonly transmitted sexually‚ but can also be transmitted through infected blood exposure and through birth. Mayoclinic.com says “AIDS is a chronic‚ potentially life-threatening condition” AIDS is caused by the retrovirus HIV‚ HIV targets T-cells which are vital immune system cells and without them it is nearly impossible to fight a common cold let alone a life threatening disease
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