Self and Peer Editing Checklist Self Edit Yes/No Peer Edit Completed by ___________________________________ Yes/No & Comments Did I include an interesting hook to grab the reader’s attention? Did she include an interesting hook to grab the reader’s attention? Did I provide enough background information to let the reader know what/why this is an issue? Did she provide enough background information to let the reader know what/why this is an issue? Did I state a clear claim‚ that argues only one
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Peer Reviewed Articles Karen Quave PSY 325 Sasha Fleary June 10‚ 2013 The first article I chose is called “Case Study in Threats of Workplace Violence From a Non-Supervisory Basis. The case study explores ethical and legal issues concerning employees who bring weapons to work and the psychological effect of that on other employees (Taylor & Zeng). Another thing that is examined in this case study is peer bullying and threats of workplace violence. The accompanying literature of
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Travel Log Peer Evaluation I chose to do my peer evaluation on Jessica. Her speech really stood out to me above the others and that is why I chose to do my evaluation on her. Her speech was about her trip to the Rivera Maya. She started her speech with an awesome introduction explaining that the reason for her trip to the Rivera Maya was that she had just got married and was going on her honeymoon. The content of Jessica’s speech was very organized. She explained her trip chronology from the first
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secure job‚ you have no intention of leaving it any time soon. There are‚ however‚ certain situations that can put the idea of seeking a new job front and center in your mind. 1. Significant social gatherings with your peer group. Attending a social gathering where you’ll be among peers who are close in age and life experience can inspire a desire for change. For instance‚ you decide to attend your high school or college reunion. The reason you go is to catch up with old friends you knew back in the
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Dear Anna‚ In this letter I will be responding to a peer review you made on my personal narrative. I would like to begin by thanking you for reviewing my narrative and assisting me in improving it. You pointed out certain things I overlooked while completing my first draft and made some helpful suggestions. Throughout the letter I will be addressing the concerns and suggestions you made on my peer review. I will be addressing issues concerning the organization and structure‚ the introduction‚ thesis
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The peer teaching lesson I created was on graphing through problem solving in an inquiry-based environment. I had a broad idea of what I wanted to accomplish‚ and with the help of my professor‚ peers‚ and host teacher I was able to create the lesson that accomplished the concept I wanted to sharpen. My host teacher gave me some ideas to keep the students engaged‚ because she was afraid if there was a lot of wait time that the students would get out of hand. My professor gave me the idea of showing
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Topic Chosen: Peer pressure into underage drinking Proposal Statement: Does peer pressure play a role in the reason for underage teenagers drink alcohol? Hypothesis: My hypothesis is that peer pressure does affect the choice of an underage teenager to drink alcohol. Teenagers who are under the influence of alcohol can experience negative affects‚ such as sexual behavior‚ including unwanted‚ unintended‚ and unprotected sexual activity & heavy drinking later in life. Research Methodology:
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times and wrote many plays that many people enjoyed. Shakespeare wrote many plays‚ some of which are still very popular today. Screenwriters even based some of their movies and musical storylines on s Shakespeare’s plays. Some songwriters have also based their songs on Shakespeare’s plays or made music specifically for his plays. Shakespeare has written many plays and few are still popular to this day. By looking at the number of publications of and about each Shakespeare play‚ it is seen that people
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Social Factors that Influence Adolescence Substance Use Cassie Boyd Abstract In society‚ there are different factors that have different impacts on adolescents and substance use. Some of the factors have to do with biological factors such as gender and ethnicity and the types of impacts this has on societal expectations for them. The other influences are more based on relationships that an adolescent has‚ such as the relationship with friends and parents. There are also many internal struggle
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Money Talks — play scriptMoney Talks by Yu-Mei Lin Cast DavidDoctorAndySueMomPolice officer ——————————————————————————– Summary Three young people wanted to save their mother who was very sick. Their mother needed an operation‚ and it would cost a lot of money. Because they had no money‚ they decided to rob a bank. However‚ their plan was defective. Their mother was sad. Scene I: In the hospital (In a room‚ the doctor talks to David.) David: (Nervous) Is my mother OK？ Doctor: (Serious)
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