Elvin Martinez Error Response Paragraph 9/28/15 One of my errors in the first essay that I have always had trouble with is run-on sentences. A fused or run-on sentence is when two or more independent clauses are joined together without an appropriate punctuation or conjunction. There are at least four ways to correct a run-on sentence. The first way is to separate them into two different sentences by putting a period at the end of the first subject and the verb group. After which‚ you capitalize
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Fundamental Attribution Error in Making a Murderer Series In the Making a Murderer series on Netflix‚ the documentary follows the life of a man‚ named Steven Avery‚ as he is arrested and imprisoned for raping and beating Penny Beerntsen in 1985‚ a woman from Manitowoc‚ WI. After 18 years in jail‚ Steven is exonerated by new DNA evidence that definitively proves that it was not him but a serial rapist by the name of Gregory Allen. After being released‚ Steven begins a lawsuit against Manitowoc County
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Why is human memory subject to error? Human memory is subject to error because human memory is imperfect just like many things in nature. The way we perceive things are not always accurate. Memory is not like a movie camera it is reconstructive. According to Wade & Tarvis (2012)‚ “Because memory is reconstructive‚ it is subject to confabulation--confusion of an event that happened to someone else with one that happened to you‚ or a belief that you remember something when it never actually happened”
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Calorimetry To determine the specific heat of a metal and its approximate atomic mass. To determine the heat of neutralization for a strong acid-strong base reaction. To determine the quantity and direction of heat flow for the dissolution of salt. Post Lab Questions and Answers: 1. In parts A and B in‚ the calorimeter‚ although a good insulator‚ absorbs some heat when the system is above room temperature. Is the reported value for the specific heat of the metal too high or too low? Explain. Is the reported
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October 13‚ 2012 Needle through a Balloon Pre-Lab Preparations: Purpose: The purpose of this experiment is to see if the balloon pops when pierced with a wooden skewer or a sharp pin. Hypothesis: If we lubricate the skewer with petroleum jelly‚ then it should go through the balloon without popping. Hypothesis for the 2nd part of the Lab: If we cover the side of the balloon with cellophane tape‚ then it will not pop when pierced with the pin. Materials: • Balloons • Long wooden
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of your laboratory work. The report is divided into several well-defined sections. Each section must be present in a complete report. To earn an outcome point for the laboratory report‚ a student must submit a formal lab report that earns a score of at least 90/100. Each error (factual‚ grammatical‚ typographical‚ spelling) results in a deduction of 5/100. Several opportunities will be offered through the second half of the semester for students to submit a successful report. Sub-par reports may
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Problem What effect does the different concentration of hydrochloric acid have to the rate of diffusion of agar that is dissolved with sodium carbonate and phenolphthalein? Introduction Diffusion is a process where the molecules intermingle as a result of their kinetic energy of random motion and is the net movement of like molecules down their concentration gradient‚ which is the energy inherent in their constant molecular motion makes them collide and careen outward from the region of higher
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Biology 20 IB Design Lab Does increasing or decreasing the ph level of a 3% concentration H2O2 (l) solution affect the amount of oxygen released between 15.0ml of the solution and a 5g sample of liver? The reaction is measured by the difference in mass of a balloon that is used to capture the amount of gas released by the catalase enzyme found in liver reacting with a basified 3% H2O2 (l) and an acidified 3% H2O2 (l) . Chemical reactions occur when two or more molecules interact and the molecules
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In the predation lab‚ my partner and I simulated the relationship between predators and prey in an ecosystem. To do this‚ we took 3 white squares‚ which represents the prey‚ and put them on a sheet of paper‚ which represents their ecosystem. We then took 1 larger pink square‚ that represented the predators‚ and let it fall onto the white squares. For the predators to be able to survive in the ecosystem‚ the pink square had to land on at least 3 white squares‚ and it also needed to land on 6 squares
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Measuring Time Date Due: 2013.09.23____ Name: Lily Li____ Class: A__ Teacher: ___Mrs Slater___ Purpose: To determine the period and the frequency of a ticker timer. Materials/Apparatus: One ticker timer One carbon paper disc One 1.5+ meter tape One test tape One stop-watch Theory: The recording timer is a device that helps you study motion‚ it is a simple electric device plugged
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