weaknesses. In the first paper I wrote‚ there were some parts that were stronger than others. Learning from my mistakes‚ I hope to procreate each paper I write better than the last. When adding the finishing details in my papers‚ I plan to use www.paperrater.com as a resource to help ensure my writing is at its best. While constructing papers‚ I hope to use my resources to help better my writing. In my writing‚ the first mistake I made was switching the order of the MLA format. An honest mistake can have
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What a journey my writing has experience over the past seven weeks has been. I have grown as writer more in this class than I have previously. Writing has always been a challenge for me. Many people have heard of someone who just can’t get math‚ well that is me with writing. Back in high school there many times that an assignment did not get turned‚ not because I had not worked on it‚ but I could never get the ideas in my head to make sense when I wrote them on paper. I would get so frustrated
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is an easier way for me to plan for my essay‚ but the way how my mind jumps to many conclusions all at once is commonly frustrating. Normally‚ I would grab a random piece of paper and start writing my essay without doing an outline first. While I am writing my essay‚ my thoughts starts to collide with all of my ideas that I had planned on using first. Due to my thoughts colliding all at once‚ I am not able to focus and fluently write an essay without managing my time to get the essay done. The
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that my flag in my heart means courage‚ because all of our soldiers had to have courage and bravery to stay alive‚ safe and self-assured from others. Deep in my heart‚ I believe that somewhere in the world‚ there is a person that needs our help. For all the dignity and self-esteem our heroes have‚ that that person and citizens around the world will get our help. The citizens in the U.S.A would have a tough life without our soldiers fighting for our freedom‚ therefore‚ I am thankful for my freedom
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One day me and my friend John and my uncle Snowman we went to go hunting in the woods and we drove around the place for a good spot to hunt. As we were driving around for a spot we saw found an abandoned place me and my uncle and friend were thinking about it so we decided to go in the place. As we went into the abandoned place we walked far into the place. We had an app on my uncles phone that how far we are from the truck and it said 30.7 miles away. Me and my uncle were surprised how far we were
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nation’s beginning and my first day with my new family. I was only three months old when I came to America so I was not totally sure what had happened. All I knew was that I flew on a plane for too long and was happy to be off. Flying all the way from South Korea was a long flight but I was finally home. The first time I found out I was adopted was around third or fourth grade. I obviously knew something was different because my skin color was not the same as my parents. Some of my classmates began to
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My hero is my mom. My mom is a person who has many responsibilities‚ but is always willing to give her time to help others. She always understands what I am going through. She knows what’s it like being a fifteen year old and going through high school. She is always there for me when I need help with homework or advice on how to do a presentation or studying for a final. She tells me what are the best things to do and the bad things not to do about relationships‚ friendships‚ and in school. “Everyone
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a new process in part of the organization and the time‚ effort‚ and collaboration it takes. The real experience gained was that of watching my mentor in his role. I observed what kind of leader he was. He was exhibited all the charecteristics of a great leader. He was able to handle and use all kinds of personalities and other leadership styles. During my time there he repateadily showed me exaples of how this worked and why it was important. Each time he changed his manner of leading people the
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I have experienced many obstacles in my life‚ but there’s that one obstacle that changed my life in a way I didn’t imagine. As a matter of fact I was not aware that such thing would present itself as an obstacle in my life but it did. In 2006 I joined the U.S. Army and was shipped off to Basic Combat Training. Just being there was a challenge on itself. During Basic Training we were taken to The Confidence Obstacle Course. At first I thought it was easy‚ run over logs‚ climb short walls‚ swing on
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Writing my first college Paper Writing my first paper for college was not easy. I was in English 050. It had been several years since I had been in high school. I was scared and I wanted to do a good job on my first paper. I wanted to show myself that I could do this whole college thing. I was trying to prove to myself that I did not wait too late to come back to school. When I turned in my rough draft to him‚ I remember telling him “I hope this is what you want”. The next time we met in class
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