proofread my rough draft. A problem I saw in my writing was my usage of words and my punctuation. As following the writing process it extended the essay a week more but it was well done. Problems that I would approach with‚ was organizing my writing in a form to make it clear. My strengths were the ideas and the details I would use in my writing. In the feature article "Shitty First Drafts‚" the author‚ Anne Lamott‚ explains her opinions and thoughts about the writing process of first drafts. Lamott
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Personal Responsibility Essay Teriesha Howard Gen200 September 12‚2013 Kate Toohig Personal Responsibility Essay Furthering your education can be a encouraging and discouraging decision; really when you have everyday life situations and experiences. Today’s average adult is working‚ taking care of children‚ and also dealing with unexpected life events and with all those things going on they continue to strive for success. Continuing education on top of all those responsibilities can add great
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part is starting. Anne Lamott has gave me an understanding along with Professor Trainor on how it is perfectly fine to have many first drafts‚ in fact it is better because that is a way on how you can always improve your writing. You literally jot down many ideas‚ anything that comes to mind and just keep going and going because no one is going to see that draft. I have struggled endlessly on starting to write‚ I believe it is the most difficult part for me as well because I just blank out when the
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Wireless networking is the best networking solution for networking an office. Why? It’s cheaper to deploy; there aren’t any expensive cables to purchase‚ labour for cable pulling through tight conduits‚ purchasing matching socket faceplates‚ purchasing tools and devices for cable repair / troubleshooting. There isn’t any excessive wire clutter‚ no cables running too-an-fro on the desk for computer‚ printer‚ fax‚ phone or PDA. What’s left? A clean desktop with only the mere unnoticeable power
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Jackie Gudino Mr. Kikos American Lit. 24 July 2014 Deception “Young Goodman Brown” by Nathanial Hawthorne‚ shows great examples of symbolism and allegory. Hawthorne shows how life is not easy no matter what path is chosen. The challenge the puritan society faces for their religion and how it influences them. He also reveals key components of real life and how deception can affect it. Throughout the passage he uses symbolism in many ways. He demonstrates how Young Goodman’s faith is being tested
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Cell Phones vs. Landlines COM/155 Although land lines and cell phones serve the same main purpose of making and receiving calls they have a large variety of differences. Regular home phones are limited to the perimeter of the house while cell phones have the mobility to be taken and used anywhere. In case of an emergency‚ it is said the home phones are much safer since the cell phones rely on signals from antennas and depending on your location you may not be able to get a signal to
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Academy Writing 101 (47) Name: Ali Mahmoud Fikri ID: 61103 Persuasion. F Language is an important component that defines a people’s heritage. But the issue is that how people use their language and on what foundation. Modernists have an estimation that Arabic is a vibrant language and must change with time‚ but traditionalists maintain that the language of a civilization can’t be customized with. This topic is defined as a more cultural and educational issue than a political one. The controversy
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cruelty and horrors of war. How does Owen convey this portrait in his poetry? Wilfred Owen was a World War 1 poet that expressed his contentious depiction of War leading him to become one of the most influential anti-war voices of the War. He uses personal first hand-experiences along with a unique writing style to highlight the truth of the pity‚ horror and cruelty of War that was otherwise masked by the other war poets. Owen uses of a variety of techniques and poetic devices to demonstrate the ideas
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Personal Responsibility Gen/200 June 28‚ 2013 Janet Madden Personal Responsibility Even though there are numerous obstacles in the world that can influence the outcome of my endeavors‚ it is my responsibility to make the correct choices in my everyday life to ensure my academic success. Only I can decide to take charge of the career I wish to have for my future. If there are any hurdles to jump through‚ I must be willing
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(the main idea the paper is trying to convey through the personal narrative—one sentence): Moving away from family and friends was very tough when I was young. I learned that this world is full of opportunities and I just have to make decisions and go out to look for them. I also learned how to accommodate to a new life. This was an opportunity that changed my life as a person. It taught me how to take over and adjust throughout the time. Rough Structural Outline (includes introduction‚ body‚ and conclusion—outlines
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