e-mail etiquette /xcom285 Associate Level Material Appendix D E-mail Etiquette Read the following e-mails. For each e-mail: • Describe any content and formatting errors found. • Determine if the content is appropriate for a workplace setting. If it is‚ explain why. If not‚ identify the errors made and rewrite the e-mail‚ to be appropriate. |
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Poorly Written Email TO: Jim FROM: Mike DATE: August 13‚ 2013 SUBJECT: ASME Vessel Requirements Jim‚ I have had a chance to review your memorandum in detail‚ research the relevant codes and standards‚ and have some preliminary conversations with Matt Hirsch (Primus) and Mike McGinnis (Innovative). I have also attached two (2) pictures of the installation in Omaha. The installation in Dallas‚ although appears to be vessel‚ is not intended to be a vessel
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Persuasive Message Antonio Lewis COMM/295 November 18‚ 204 James Eyster Persuasive Message Part 1 Persuasive Message to Boss 1. Create the message for boss Dear Boss‚ From: Antonio I have an amazing new product that I cannot wait for you to see. It is the new trial product that puts everything that is on a smartphone to your wrist. This new item will be called an IWatch. There will be three different styles to make. One of them being a sporty look; this one will be for our customers that are on
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Project Management Email OPS/571 April 20‚ 2015 Dear Mr. Gritsch‚ In response to your email‚ our team has analyzed each project. In your email‚ you stated that the selected project should generate revenue within 12 month of next week’s PMO Review. You also stated that we should also consider the degree of risk involved with on-time completion‚ the critical path requirement and cost‚ and the effective life cycle and forecasted ROI. In order to make a recommendation‚ we took into account
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E_Mail_is_Better@Communicating.net Before telephones the only way to communicate with each other was to write letters. It took days before the letter got to the recipient and it took days for the writer to get the reply. Then telephones were invented and conversations became instant. Most people loved the telephone and its usefulness but some enjoyed and missed writing letters. Luckily E-mail was invented which allows people to write letters and send and receive them instantly. E-mail is a very
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Persuasive Messages Natascha Scheffel COM/295 June 1‚ 2015 Sandra Norris Part 1: Persuasive Message Dear Sir‚ Apple one production team has come up with a new sleek design for the next Iphone 7. The Iphone 6 has had a remarkable response with our customers this past year and this motivates us to continue improving for all Apple is all about new innovative technology and futuristic growth. Iphone 6 has brought in amazing numbers of sales
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Hello Mr. Wonders‚ I am emailing you in regards to the email I received about my eligibility to take the TEAS‚ and apply for the nursing program. I am a very proactive student when it comes to my education‚ therefore I use my campus resources often to help me better obtain my goals. My grades‚ professors‚ tutors‚ and peers can contest to my determination and hard work. I often see my advisor throughout the semester/year to recalibrate my academic goals and revise my plan‚ if need be. During my
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Project Management E-Mail OPS/571 Recommendation for Piper Industries Corporation Project Management Dear Project Manager: After reviewing the information that was provided in a previous email regarding the three projects coded‚ Juniper‚ Palomino and Stargazer‚ I believe it will be more beneficial for the company to use the Palomino project. In my personal analysis‚ with the Juniper project‚ there is just too much low risk with completion on time‚ and with the Stargazer Project‚ although forecasted
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Writing Negative Messages LEARNING OBJECTIVES After studying this chapter‚ you will be able to 1 2 3 4 Apply the three-step writing process to negative messages Explain the differences between the direct and the indirect approaches to negative messages‚ including when it’s appropriate to use each one Identify the risks of using the indirect approach‚ and explain how to avoid such problems Adapt negative messages for internal and external audiences 5 6 7 Explain the importance of maintaining
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Good Example of a Persuasive Email Message Garett Kamau‚ Gifts Marketing Director Enhancing Productivity Through Telecommuting Garett‚ Opens with discussion of a company problem and the telecommuting proposal. Since the announcement in last week’s meeting that we must identify ways to reduce the number of daily commuters‚ I’ve considered several possible options. I believe telecommuting could not only reduce my number of commutes but increase my productivity as well. Outlines duties
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