Smarthinking’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing Smarthinking’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! *Strengths of the essay: Hi Heather! I am Patricia C.‚ and I will be your e-structor for your essay about the metamorphosis of a butterfly. First of
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Saksham Jain Mrs. Spencer AP Language and Composition 21 December 2012 Breaking the Balance Every wise man or woman to walk on the face of this Earth has known that there is a balance in the universe. For every good‚ there is an evil; for every virtue‚ a vice. For every dollar earned‚ there is a dollar spent‚ and for every moment spent working‚ the reward for that work becomes all the greater. However‚ if you are like me‚ you: a) believe that you must have done something terrible in a past
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of the military arm of government. Scrutinizing policy objectives with creative thinking and ongoing analysis in order to continually frame the problem and develop/revise plans that will apply the best possible doctrine at the highest levels is the intent. Military planners for Operation IRAQI FREEDOM (OIF)‚ the 2003 U.S. military action against Iraq‚ allowed the civilian leadership to dictate how the military should fight. Instead of military planners planning for what policy makers wanted the military
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however believes that it is a spiritual death brought about through a lack of control in the social context of the present that Eliot is trying to portray. Through an analysis of both of these contexts‚ a social comment can be made to determine which of these ideas defines the overarching theme behind T.S. Eliot’s poem Rhapsody on a Windy Night. Young’s views on the degradation of society are shown clearly through the quote about the broken spring; “A broken spring in
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Name (Kristina Player) Date (January 18‚ 2011) Class Name and Section Number (Writing 1‚ B5Z3) Name of Assignment (Process Analysis Essay) Birds of a Feather Flock Together The Bible: Ecclesiastes notes that "two are better than one; because they have a good reward for their labor. For if they fall‚ the one will lift up his fellow: but woe unto him that is alone when he falleth; for he hath not another to help him up." A good friendship is one of the most important relationships we will have
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How to Make the Perfect Golf Putt One of the most common areas that a golfer will have issues with is the putting. Virtually anyone can throw a golf ball down the fairway. All it takes it a proper swing and the right amount of speed and your golf ball can soar. The hardest part is the putt. This is the time when aiming is most important and when being off your mark by just a tiny bit can determine whether you have a par game or a very bad day. If you are wondering how to make the perfect golf putt
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Many similarities exist between Night‚ Schindler ’s List‚ and the documentary. All three followed the same progression and sequence of events. At first‚ the Jews were just placed under house arrest after losing their businesses. Soon after‚ they are moved into dingy ghettoes. From there‚ the men and the women were separated and herded into cattle cars which took them to concentration camps. There in the camps‚ Jews were forced into labor working for the Nazis. When the war was nearing its end‚ the
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one to explore how one specific aspect of language in a text can be used to influence a responders view of other people and the world‚ this module is divided into two electives: distinctive voices and distinctively visual. The film I have been studying to convey module A is one night the moon. One night the moon is an Australian musical/ film directed by Rachel Perkins set in the 1980’s about a small family that lives in the country-side (a father‚ a mother‚ and a daughter). One night they sing a lullaby
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How are you‚ Anthony? Hope you are doing well as I am. Recently‚ I finished reading a book called Night by Elise Wiesel. This book is based on a real life circumstance endured by young Elie Wiesel. I truly enjoyed reading this book‚ therefore‚ I believe that you will enjoy it too. So I am recommending this book to you to read. Reading this book will give you a more in-depth‚ personal view of Elie’s experience during the Holocaust. An interesting fact: Holocaust was derived from the Greek word ‘holokauston’
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Shakespeare through the use of symbol‚ demonstrates how light can describe love and darkness can denote hate: “Some consequences yet hanging in the stars…night’s revels‚ and expire the term of a despised life closed in…vile forfeit of untimely death.” (p. 49 lines 114-118). For the theme asserted by the diction suggest there is two paths to follow in one’s life‚ one of love and the other of hate different in nature but both similarly led to the same destination even though they are encompassed by
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