I. Major Essay #1 A. The following Essays are listed from least successful to most successful. The “White Shoes” paper; the “Clay Model” paper; the second “Jazz” essay; the first “Jazz” essay; and the “Composing Songs” essay. II. The explanation and supportive reasoning why these papers are ranked the way they are. A. “White Shoes” paper 1. This student has misspelled some words and also did not use correct punctuation‚ causing some sentences to be run on sentences. 2. “They agreed
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SHOULD I BE PROUD OF MY COUNTRY? Why am I proud of my country you ask‚ there are many reasons to it… some of them have been illustrated here forth… haffun… 1. Where else would you be allowed to pee on the road‚ on street intersections‚ footpaths‚ in short any place you would like. I have known that animals use a tactic of urinating over a place to mark a territory‚ but this is ridiculous. And don’t let me get started on spitting. 2. Where else would you find stray cows‚ buffaloes‚ dogs‚ cats
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Walking in Someone Else’s Shoes Imagine being a 23 year old male‚ six feet two inches‚ broad shoulders‚ a scruffy beard‚ and walking through Chicago in the late evening. Oh I forgot to mention one thing‚ also imagine being African-American. African-Americans have always been assumed to be up to no good or to be big trouble makers. That is a stereotype that we see become reality in some places‚ but also see to be completely false in other areas. In the essay “Just Walk on By” by Brent Staples‚
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to exploit consumers as early as in childhood‚ and through magazine ads and trends. If you think about society before the invention of advertising‚ they never had the urge to go shopping and buy new cars‚ gadgets‚ clothes or the hottest new trendy shoes. Fair desires were more closely tied to their needs such as food‚ shelter and basic transportation. Advertising and consumerism have magnified these desires within us. Today more than ever‚ we are always wanting to buy and spend more. In the 1960s
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In The poems "The Burning Truck" and "Widower in the Country" Murray uses imagery‚ metaphors and personification to enhance the impact of the poems on the reader. "The Burning Truck". The Poem is about war and shows how it can bring out the most primitive emotions out of people. The Poem also shows that during war time regular laws do not exist but a different set of wartime rules and the war will continue. The Title of the Poem‚ The burning truck gives the reader a strong image of a truck which
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Americans have several reasons to be proud of their country. Everyone can be who they want to be. We are allowed to say what we want‚ and to believe what we think is right. Most importantly‚ we can choose who we want to run our country. In 2009‚ we Americans put our races behind us and elected our first black president. We are allowed to choose our leaders based on who they are as a person‚ not because of what family they were born into. After we signed the Declaration of Independence in 1766‚
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Riley Murray Health 1 Live Oct. 28‚ 2012 Nutrition Analysis/Change Paper Based on the Nutrients Report I created for my “Average Eaten” diet what I normally eat seems to be pretty healthy. I work at a Subway full time so I eat that a LOT which is a fairly healthy place to eat. I try to stay away from junk food and I don’t eat in large portions so I’m a healthy weight for my age and height. However‚ after analyzing all the food I ate in three days I realized apparently just eating fairly healthy
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Where did Charles Murrays’ Logic Go? In the article by Charles Murray‚ “Are Too Many People Going to College?”‚ Murray raises interesting and controversial topics. Murray is suggesting that maybe school counselors should not encourage every student to attend a four year university for their B.A.. Instead that they should only encourage those students that are in the correct percentile in linguistics and that their career goals require them to do so. Murray also‚ believes that a student should not
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Can the British be proud of their Empire? Britain had the largest empire in the world‚ by 1900. They were ruling an estimated 25% of the globe‚ but just because Britain had the most power‚ it doesn’t mean that they used it for the best. For example‚ Rani Lakshmi‚ was an Indian Princess and when her husband died the British took his land‚ and the natives had no say in the matter. The British also tried to change their customs even though they didn’t want them changed. The Indians tried to fight
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Darkness in literature is quite beautiful when written in poetry‚ like how John Donne and Edgar Allan Poe speak of death‚ the sense of darkness it gives. By using this method of writing‚ it makes the poems captivating‚ and makes the readers read in between the lines to find different meanings in the poem. It makes the readers feel some sort of connection to the poetry. It makes one question the true value death has in one’s life. If death should be taken as something that is not as big of a deal
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