help me know what to change in my writing. When I read and hear other classmate’s essays and journals it gives a lot of information that I didn’t even know. When peer editing‚ it helps me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change it. I believe that when you peer edit‚ it
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killed is gruesome and depressing‚ but this title is also a pun because it is meant to have another meaning. If you take away the ’S’ of ’Slaughterhouse 5’ it is ’laughterhouse 5’ which gives the book an entertaining‚ optimistic look. Vonnegut uses this war story book as an anti war-book. He uses the way in which Billy jumps from one stage of his life to another‚ uncontrollably‚ ’Billy is spastic in time’ to represent how chaotic war was. He shows how people think of war as being great‚ manly and herotic:
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Upon choosing this topic I pondered‚ what next? I sat in front of my PC deliberating what direction I wanted this piece to go in‚ and what impression I wanted to give my future alma mater’s admissions of myself and then it struck me. The point of this essay is not to paint an illusion of myself to you‚ but‚ to show you what I have to offer as a unique individual. Marrianne Williamson in her book‚ “Return to Love” and I quote‚ wrote‚ “Our greatest fear is not that we are inadequate‚ but that we
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In this secondary 2 classroom‚ there are 38 students in total. The inclusive culture need to be implemented as four of them have special educational needs. In the following paragraphs‚ cases of students with different types of special educational need will be briefly analyzed in the first section. Then‚ aiming to implement the inclusive culture in the classroom‚ the lesson plan entitled ‘Natural Disaster’ will be evaluated and adjusted‚ and more suggestion for accommodation will be given towards
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What Would You Do? Scenario 1- Della the Delinquent Cat Lady As the president of the board of directors of the cat shelter‚ I am faced with rather or not Ms. Della should remain as part of the staff at the cat shelter. There are several problems that have been brought to my attention and I feel that now is the time to figure out exactly what should be done regarding the matter. After‚ evaluating the situation and giving it a great deal of consideration‚ I have come up several solutions to
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Lampungnese has distinguished characteristics that make them unique from other tribes in Indonesia. These characteristics are known as Pi’il‚ Nyeruit‚ and Sebambangan. Pi’il‚ the most obvious characteristic among all‚ is the condition when these people show their self-esteem and pride in front of others which is dealing with their wealth and position. For instance‚ Lampungnese will pretend as if they were rich although they are actually live in poverty. They wear their best clothes anywhere they
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Dr. Nardi Euro HW4 1. Q: Explain the nature and outcome of the Greek independence movement. What other results emerged from the Near Easter crisis of the late 1820s? A: The Greeks had been under the domination of the Ottoman Turks since 1815. A sense of unity between the Greeks still survived and caused nationalism and a desire for independence. In 1821‚ Alexander Ypsilanti led a revolt. The Greek Powers‚ especially Metternich‚ refused to support Ypsilanti because they were against revolution
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Worlds “Short Stories From Different Cultures” All 12 stories can be examined for in English Literature Paper 2. This booklet covers the first six stories (‘Dead Men’s Path’ to ‘The Tall Woman and Her Short Husband). The second group of six stories (‘The Pieces of Silver’ to ‘The Winter Oak’) is used in Paper 2 of the English exam as well as the Literature exam. These are covered in a separate booklet. Questions can be about character‚ theme or culture. You also need to be able to
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nucleus‚ chloroplast‚ vacuole‚ endosome‚ lysosome and peroxisome. If one of the organelles n the cell does not function well‚ it will give impacts towards the cell‚ especially the most important organelle like nucleus. The cell nucleus is a double membrane‐bound organelle that contains the genetic information of the cell packaged in the form of chromatin. The nucleus is a characteristic feature of most eukaryotic cell (Kannanganattu and Vidisha 2006). It contains the genetic material‚ the DNA
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Chapter 2 – Culture Summary The concept of culture is sometimes easier to grasp by description rather than definition. All human groups possess culture‚ which consists of the language‚ beliefs‚ values‚ norms‚ and material objects that are passed from one generation to the next. Although the particulars of culture may differ from one group to another‚ culture itself is universal-all societies develop shared‚ learned ways of perceiving and participating in the world around them. Culture can be
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