me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change it. I believe that when you peer edit‚ it helps to make your writing that is the best. It also help you learn how to write better sentences and helps you see if the reader understands your point or you need to explain it in another
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Question: Do you have any memories about Pearl Harbor or World War II? Do you know people who served in World War II? In what ways did World War II affect you personally? Answer: “The was was over in 1945 and I was born in 1947. I saw movies growing up. My dad was in the Navy and he was on the destroyers. My dad worked a lathe‚ he built torpedoes. One time I even got one. I did know people in WWII. I remember relatives talking about the big loss that our country had experienced.” Question: Do you
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When Do Government tax Azita Shafai Incentives become export subsidies Case Study TDMT 1353 1. Do you think Bombardier and Embraer are guilty as charged? Please explain your answer. In my opinion I think Bombardier and Embraer are guilty as charged because both accuse each other of what they are individually guilty of. In that they both had government help in manufacturing aircraft whether it was a low interest federal loan
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“Where Are You Going‚ Where Have You Been?” Paper “Where Are You Going‚ Where Have You Been?” is a short story that poses many questions centered around the protagonist‚ Connie and the antagonist Arnold Friend and his “comrade” Ellie. The fate of Connie at the end of the story is still up for debate after all these years after the story was published in 1966. The main question posed is who actually is Arnold Friend? Is he the devil or something else? The answer may never be fully known but in
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2. What do we want to learn? What are the key concepts (form‚ function‚ causation‚ change‚ connection‚ perspective‚ responsibility‚ reflection) to be emphasized within this inquiry Key concepts: Form‚ responsibility‚ connection Related concepts: cooperation or conflict‚ interdependence What lines of inquiry will define the scope of the inquiry into the central idea? What teacher questions/provocations will drive these inquiries? Lines of inquiry
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WHAT EXPERIENCE DO YOU HAVE THAT YOU BELIEVE WILL MAKE YOU A SUCCESSFUL POST UNIVERSITY STUDENT My name is Leona Woolfe‚ I was born and raised in Jamaica Queens New York. My siblings and I were in the foster care system‚ at that time abuse was happening to children unfortunately a lot of issues were swept under the rug‚ we would just be moved again to another home until the age of 17 for me when we were let out of the system but the mental damage had already affected my family and it was left
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"You Are What You Eat" There are many reasons I believe that you are what you eat. When assessing an obese individual you would now that they have a nutritional problem. Likewise when you look at a frail underweight individual they may have a nutritional problem as well. Your health depends on what you eat. Weather an individual is obese‚ underweight‚ recovering from surgery or has a debilitating disease a balanced diet has a significant role in good health. A well balanced diet according to Lutz
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Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University? Not Everything That Is Learned Is Contained In Books Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Parents are the best teachers. If You Could Change One Important Thing About Your Hometown Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University? Most of us has its own reason why do we go in a prestigious University or College. Have you ever questioned yourself why do you go in a certain university. What makes a
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Unlike males‚ women in advertising only have 3 main categories in which they can be represented. They are Domestic‚ Sex object and Beauty. Many women are used in advertisements to sell items for the home or body. These products are purposely depicted to enhance one’s beauty and by doing this‚ the woman seems to be more in control of herself and the world around her. The domestic role for females in advertising is one that hurts society more than we think. Women are shown as the only ones who are
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Do you remember your first day in the university? Well‚ I remember my first day I was waiting all the summer to start at the university and my new life. I felt happy because I was going to start studying what I want but at the same time I was very nervous because it was my first day in the university and I didn’t know any person so welcome to my life as a college student that change my life forever and also the best experience in my life. In the first day I was lost and I had to ask one person
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