Elvin Martinez Error Response Paragraph 9/28/15 One of my errors in the first essay that I have always had trouble with is run-on sentences. A fused or run-on sentence is when two or more independent clauses are joined together without an appropriate punctuation or conjunction. There are at least four ways to correct a run-on sentence. The first way is to separate them into two different sentences by putting a period at the end of the first subject and the verb group. After which‚ you capitalize
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Name Professor’s Name Class Date Descartes’ two proofs of God’s existence. Descartes uses the proof ‘Meditation III’ to explain God’s existence. The proof is given via reasoning‚ which begins by describing how he comes to such a conclusion. Descartes does this by mentally closing himself from the general public‚ ignoring hearing‚ sight‚ and the remaining of his senses as he deeply looks and depends upon himself. This state gives him the opportunity of making an introspective look at the existence
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A. Catherine‚ our main character‚ wants proof of many things‚ mainly proof that she isn’t crazy like her dad ended up being‚ and establish her own legacy. She also wanted to prove that the prime number proof that she led Harold Dobbs to find is her work‚ and not her dad’s. I think that her main proof is to sort of separate herself from her father‚ because the movie starts with Catherine talking to her deceased father‚ asking and discussing the nature of her father’s craziness‚ and if she will end
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good fence makes a good neighbor." I agree and disagree with this statement. Most people want a solid fence between their house and their neighbors. I only the other hand‚ see a fence as a way to put yourself in a space that is just yours for nobody else to enter. I think that a fence can be symbolic of an emotional wall. For example‚ a neighbor who has their house fenced off by a twenty foot fence may want to keep to themselves and not be involved with the rest of the community. A tall fence is
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DBQ Essay (Part A 2004) When one studies history‚ they will realize and understand that every large movement or spread of controversial ideas will generate a huge variety of responses from people; both supporters and non supporters. With a glance at the information provided in the documents‚ it is evident that the spread of Buddhism from India to China was not an exception and had its own set of responses. Many Chinese scholars desired to extinguish this new spread of ideas and annihilate all
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The production of Fences was very intriguing‚ from the actors to the scenery. Throughout the play‚ Troy‚ who is a respectable friend‚ father‚ husband and brother‚ faces many mindful hardships with all of his loved ones. Troy’s dream of becoming a major-league baseball player was crushed‚ he says that it was because of the color of his skin‚ but Rose‚ Troy’s wife‚ expresses that it was only because he was too old of age. And because of this Troy does not support the idea of his son Cory to go off
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The Little Prince – Text Response Essay ‘The Little Prince’ written by Antoine de Saint-Exupery conveys life lessons through the novella. Many of the lessons revolve around meeting characters. De Saint-Exupery cleverly interweaves these messages throughout the prince’s conversation with the pilot which include many encounters with characters who teach the little prince lessons about kindness‚ modesty‚ conceitedness‚ lying and narrow mindedness. The most prominent are the lessons of looking with
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In the children book The Other Side written by Jacqueline Woodson there is a fence on the side of the narrator’s yard. The fence that separates African Americans and Caucasians is symbolic for the segregation of the races in the United States. The author uses the two kids as a way to explain segregation to children. The kids on the either side of the fence‚ in the story‚ do not understand why the fence is there. In the story‚ there is several different feelings. In the beginning the tone is
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What does the fence mean? In reality‚ people have certain things that they carry around or have in their homes that will give them what they need to be in a comforting state of mind. In the play Fences by August Wilson‚ this item happens to literally be a partially built fence around a dirt yard with a raggedy looking house in the center of it. Each family member sees the fence a little differently and provides a certain symbolic perspective on what it has to do with their family. Cory‚ who is
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Oswald the Rabbit. Here is a fluffy‚ loving‚ caring‚ cutest little cartoon I have ever made. "Millions I tell ya. MILLIONS! He will made me a fortune‚" I said. "No one will ever have my creation‚" I told everyone. That’s what I thought. Sadly no having the copyright on my magnificent Rabbit. Oswald was taken away by someone else claiming to take my creation. This heart break was the worst‚ felt like I lost a loved one‚ a son. NO! I am not going to stop everything because of a Rabbit. Even though
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