Editing Worksheet for Essay Drafts: ENG 111 Your Name Gregory Wishart 1. Name of the essay author Shakara Beals 2. Is the thesis statement the last sentence in the introductory paragraph and does it contain the three points? Yes ___ List the three points: a. liabilities incurred by the business b. financing of the business c. input and involvement in the business 3. Outline the essay below. Thesis Statement (copy) There are many similarities as well as differences
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that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. No one can deny that a vacation has many benefits for students. In Viet Nam‚ it has long been a controversy whether give a vacation should be long or short. Most of students think that is great if they have several short vacations each year while others disagree. Both
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purpose: To persuade my audience to support the legislation to provide everyone with four weeks paid vacation Central Idea: Adopted paid vacation legislation in the USA will help us to stay healthy‚ avoid stress and bond with our family. Introduction Attention: I. Do you know that more than 147 countries‚ including all developed countries‚ now have a law that guaranties paid vacation to every employee? But the United States is the only industrial country in the world which doesn’t have
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My Weekend Vacation By Eve Billings Over the weekend I went to universal studio with my little brother‚ friends and their three kids. We all got in the van and drove five hours to Los Angeles. And with four kids all under the age of ten is not easy. We had to play Disney music the whole ride there so the two year old wouldn’t cry. And all we can hear is “let it go” from the back seat all the way there. When we got there we had so much fun
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Vacationing at beach or in mountains Where would you prefer to go on vacations? What is your dream destination for an ideal vacation? All of us like to go on vacation‚ even if it is somewhere near by our place or even when you just have to stay at home‚ without doing any work. Who does not like vacations? Vacations become more exciting and interesting when you find a right and good place to spend your leisure time. Most people go on vacations to islands‚ beaches‚ mountains or some other country‚ where they
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place for vacation? In the mountain or at the beach? Every year people work hard and hard to earn money and don’t have much time to relax. Tet holiday is the better time to have vacation but where you can choose the place to relax is very importation so you must think about it first. It have 2 decision for you to choose : the mountain or the beach First i will talk about the Advantages and Disadvantages when you have vacation in the mountain. Where is the better place for vacation? In the mountain
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Estephany Castro Topic: Why you should take a vacation every year General Purpose: To persuade Specific Purpose: By the end of my speech the audience will be more interested in taking a vacation every year. INTRODUCTION: Attention Getter: According to a study from the State University of NY‚ people who take at least one vacation a year reduce their risk of death by 20 percent. Purpose: By the end of my speech‚ my audience will be more inclined to take a vacation every year. Importance to Audience: My
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School closes down next week for the summer holidays. I am eagerly awaiting the day I go home from school knowing that I will not be expected to enter my classroom for two long months. There are many things that I would like to do in my holidays. First of all I will visit all my friends turn by turn. They keep pestering me to visit them at home but school keeps me too busy‚ my friends and I will play the whole day long. Cricket is my favourite sport and my friends have organized cricket matches
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WORST VACATION TREMAYNE ROBINSON ENGLISH 090 STRAYER UNIVERSITY November 30‚ 2012 Many people take vacations to get away from the everyday routine. When taking a vacation‚ people never plan for what could go wrong. I had taken a vacation to the Philippines that turned out to be a nightmare. The vacation started off bad before the trip even begun and continued to only get worse. I had caught a cold and the ended up getting food poisoning with a blood parasite during my vacation in the
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Henry Mouliatis ENGL 1301 February 5‚ 2013 An Unforgettable Vacation 2) Recall a place you were once fond of – a vacation retreat. Summer 2012‚ in the mid weeks of August; I can recall fond memories of the hot sand between my toes. The sun beaming of my aviator shades‚ crisp touch of my tan skin lying on a jumbo beach chair‚ in the beautiful Island of Destin Florida. Here in this sanctuary‚ was like living in a dream‚ so different compared to anywhere I had ever been. Different in a
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