introduction‚ how have I tried to show that my problem is interesting‚ significant‚ and problematic? b) How could I engage you‚ my peers‚ more fully with my initial problem? 1a) I used an anecdote to make it more interesting. Also I said why this problem bothers me. 1b) My introduction should’ve been longer 2a) How do I provide cues that my purpose is to explore a problematic question rather than argue a thesis? b) How might the opening section of my draft be improved? 2a) I posted a question
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Why Televisions Should Be Unplugged I believe all the televisions in America should be unplugged‚ and we should become a nomadic‚ goat-herding race- well‚ maybe not the part about the goat herding. Anyway‚ television programming is corrupting our youths’ minds; they are being stupefied and are becoming virtual vegetables as they are molded by the programs they view to be lazy‚ selfish‚ and to forsake all their moral and ethical values. The so called "entertainment value" to the shows is what’s
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of life to children and adults alike. While money seems to be a tremendous motivation for most people‚ I have various other incentives for seeking higher education. The first reason I pursued college is because I want a career. Most of the adults in my life did not attend college‚ and ended up working deadend‚ low paying jobs. Day in and day out they perform the same menial‚ monotonous tasks. I would often recieve words of advice from these people‚ all of which followed the same general pattern:
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2013 Why I Want To Be a Teacher I want to be an elementary school teacher for many reasons. I would have to say one of the primary reasons would have to be‚ it is a career I will always love to pursue. I have a great passion for working with young minds. I love seeing a child’s knowledge and abilities develop. I want to be a teacher‚ so I can help kids develop‚ learn and grow. Teaching is a great profession for me mainly because I want a career where I can give back and help my community. I want
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I belong to that classification of people known as husbands. I am a husband. Not too long ago‚ while I was mowing the lawn‚ I was thinking about it and decided that I too‚ want a husband. Why do I want a husband? I want a husband whose whole life revolves around me. Everything he does or says should have some significance to me in one way or another. He should put me at the center of his life and I should always be first on his list. Not his friends‚ not his siblings‚ and definitely not his
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always asked where I am going to college or what do I want to do with my life. For many‚ this can be a simple question with a quick clear answer‚ showing that they know exactly what they want to do with their lives. For me‚ this is a very difficult decision and my future career is still a mystery. Knowing what you want to achieve in life is a wonderful thing‚ but the most important aspect of a career is happiness. Even though I do not know what I want to do for the rest of my life‚ I do know that some
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Why you should weld Don’t be afraid of the future‚ Build it. Welding is a neat and fun activity that you can build cool things from. Welding is not hard and you can learn to do it. You can do this on your free time. From welding projects and other things you can make money from them by selling them. If you have never welded in your life before you can still learn to weld. It’s not hard to learn and you can do some cool things. All you need is a welding helmet‚ welder‚ and the cables. It may take
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Why I Want to Be a Lifeguard There are many reasons that I might want to be a lifeguard: my paycheck would increase‚ I could get a job in practically any community‚ and I could spend my days outside in the sun. None of these‚ however‚ are the reason I want to be a lifeguard. The real reason I want to become a lifeguard is because it would allow me to better as both a person and as a pool employee. I know being a lifeguard involves lots of responsibility‚ but that is part of what intrigues
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Why should fracking be banned? Because liberals are an autoimmune disease that want this country to fail at any possible costs. It shouldn’t be‚ fracking doesn’t do anything with the water‚ studies have proven that‚ plus "Green cars" actually leave a bigger biological footprint. It shouldn’t. Low information people are scared because they are being lied to. Because coal miners don’t like it. Power plant companies are making a transition from coal to natural gas due to fracking‚ and we’re putting
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I believe in being an overachiever. Striving to go beyond my personal limits and achieve success has been my motivation since graduating. After being advised not to bother pursuing a sciences degree‚ I chose to listen to myself pursue the challenge. The proudest moment of my academic career was graduating with a bachelor’s degree in biological sciences. From my path to becoming an optometrist I expect to have achieved more than I believed I could‚ and exceed the expectations of others. The field
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