I have learned that revising your writing makes it way better than before. You find your mistakes and realize you can replace words such as “bring to” to a different high vocabulary word such as “cease”. I know now that there is no way to make your paper perfect. There will always be a word‚ words‚ or sentence you could change.In addition‚ I’ve gained a better understanding on passive and active sentences. Once I was done writing my paper‚ and began to reread it I found some passive sentences. All
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Section 1: A draft Executive Summary Apple Inc. is a multiplier company. The California Corporation founded in 1977. Its wholly-owned subsidiaries designs‚ manufactures and markets personal computers‚ mobile communication and media equipment‚ and other internet applications‚ it provides the products to the different type of customers. The company gives the strategy is free‚ The Company’s business strategy leverages its unique ability to design and develop its own operating systems‚ hardware
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Critically reflective essay Emma Purnell: 0522771 “Our planning (or worrying about) what’s happening next gives us little opportunity or inclination to examine what has just passed” Wallace (2005) Writing from a student teacher perspective I thought it was very apt to start with the quote above. I believe I‚ like many student teacher colleagues‚ spend so much time worrying about what I have to do next‚ that sometimes I need to have a gentle prod or reminder that I need to be critically reflective of my
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me a ride and went into the hospital alone. The nurse asked “Are you ready to become a mother? Because you will be having your baby today” I was terrified‚ anxious and ready. I called my mom and child’s father and within 5 minutes they arrived. About 6 hours into labor my water finally broke and the contractions really started to get intense. Shortly after the doctor checked me she told me I was 10cm dilated and it was time to start pushing. “Keep your legs up to your chest‚ breath in‚ count to ten
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Last year‚ I heard many different views about the Business Strategy course but they all seemed to scream “Thinking About Bull****” synonymous for Thinking About Business (now known as Evidence-Based Management). I was given advice to attend the guest lectures since they are the most important lectures‚ as they are examinable. However‚ being highly motivated and excited for the year ahead‚ I diligently went to all the lectures and wrote down notes. I laughed at the thought of having to keep a learning
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understand you more and be able to form their own question. Things I would do to make me become a better writer. I was spell check and check the grammar‚ I will keep it short and simple‚ I will write in the appropriate format‚ I will take an effective writing
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Maria Espinoza English 1301 Thomas McEachin March 6‚ 2012 Broken Pieces of a Shattered Soul When I caught a glimpse of myself in that mirror‚ nothing seemed superficial. I could see my scars‚ my weaknesses‚ my broken heart‚ bursting out at me. I could feel the depth of the wounds and taste the foulness of being alone. Everything was so real. As the four years of “hell” arrived at my doorstep‚ my only worry was how on earth I would socially survive. The first year of high school was a breeze
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anything because I work early mornings during the week so when I get off I look at my calendar to decide what I want to do so procrastination for me is not an option. APA writing is a little easy for me since I did it in my undergrad. I also did MLA which was similar with some difference. I have books and print outs on both writing styles. Speaking of books‚ I take the easy way out on getting my books. If I want to order books
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In our week three Practice Foundations tutorial the class participated in a role play exercise designed to assess our ability to utilise interpersonal communication skills to obtain a basic patient health history of a fictitious patient. My assigned patient was a seventeen year epileptic old male who had suffered three colic seizures‚ one at home and two after admission to hospital I was looking forward to this task I was initially concerned about this task as I am comfortable found
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Reflective Essay Human resource Management Module Code: HRM 1120 Module Title: People and Organisations Module Level: 1 Credit Points: 30 Module Tutor: Dr Bruce Thompson Student Name: Navid Shah Student ID: M00384663 Submission Date: 05/03/2012 Reflective essay I have a good understanding about Human Resource Management. Going through human resource management has taught me so much more than stuff about how the working companies deal with their success in employing the right
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