The peer review is over Alex Wittrock’s Draft 1.1 “Perspectives on Barefoot Running versus Shod Running”. The thesis statement is‚ “When looking at the overwhelming evidence for and against barefoot running‚ many of the experts would agree that running without shoes is beneficial for injury prevention‚ while other experts disagree and argue the risks are too great attempting to run without shoes.” The purpose in the first paragraph is clear in that the author explains as to why the ideas of whether
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Name: KEJIAN YANG Topic: Smoking Thesis Statement: If you quit smoking‚ you will live a healthy life. Type of Speech: Fact General Purpose: To inform Strategy for Presenting Content: Problem Solution Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience that breaking the habit of smoking is the right way to go because smoking is harmful to the individual personally as well as being harmful to others around you. Introduction: Did you know that smoking is the most preventable cause of disease and premature
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apart and nearly one hundred years‚ there are many similarities between the two. The most significant difference between the two empires is the basis of government ideals. The Han dynasty was the most influential dynasty in Chinese history and led to china becoming a country as we know it today. They extended Chinese rule from southern Mongolia to northern Vietnam and as far west as Nepal. One of the main reason for the prosperity and solidity of the Han dynasty was the relationship between the imperial
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Imperial administration in Imperial Rome from 31 B.C.E. to 476 C.E and Han China from 206 B.C.E to 220 C.E. had both their similarities and differences. Similarities include general idea of equality‚ living under one ruler who gives the people some control‚ and the roles of families. One major difference is the method of political control with religion‚ and the way their leaders were selected. Some similarities of imperial administration in Imperial Rome and Han China include the general idea of equality
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Thesis statement???????????? You might wonder what a pediatric nurse is well‚ it is a certified nurse that deals with only children. There use to be just be regular nurses that had no certification at all. This changed when the first children’s hospital in Philadelphia‚ Pennsylvania was built in 1855. After the first children’s hospital was built many more began to pop up everywhere in the United States. For‚ many years in the children’s hospitals there was just nurses with no certification on
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Black Friday a Persuasive Thesis Statement on Black Friday: Even though Some families like going shopping on Black Friday. Black Friday is bad because Black friday takes away family time on Thanksgiving. and Black Friday is dangerous because people get trampled and get in fights over stuff. Black Friday is dangerous because People get in fight. One time a someone got tasered by someone just to get something. Another reason is a crowed of people pushed open the doors and trampled a
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Thesis Statement: Neal Dow generated a movement against alcohol known the Temperance Movement. He was a man with a lot of perseverance who never gave up to reach his goal. During the 19th century in Maine and other states liquor was a major problem that a lot of people didn’t actually notice. Mainly because water was often contaminated which made alcohol much safer to drink‚ and it wasn’t expensive than milk and water. Neal Dow a politician born in Portland‚ Maine on March 20‚1804. Always saw
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Thesis Statement: War can have an adverse affect on children and adults. Although there are little positive affects of war there are vastly negative affects in mental and physical health. The main topics that come to mind when thinking about the adverse affects on children during war are their lack of education‚ the traumatic scars left behind‚ and the death of loved ones. One of the affects of war for children is their education‚ during war there is no time to go to school. Getting your education
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An Exposition of Psalm 23: Reflecting on the Psalms Thesis Statement- The rationale of this paper is to give an exposition of Psalm 23‚ while reflecting on Psalms as a whole‚ in order to give adequate evidence for arriving at a conclusion that proves the LORD is the only necessity in an individual’s life in regards to the role of a servant. I. Introduction: This paper will contain three main sections. In the first part‚ the historical and literary setting of Psalm 23 will be covered. In the second
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Comparing and Contrasting Ancient Rome with Ancient China Over the course of history there have been many empires that amass enough wealth and influence to be considered major world powers. Two of these empires are ancient China‚ and ancient Rome. Though they shared similarities‚ they were fundamentally different in several ways. Both the Chinese and Roman empires were vast and powerful. They each encompassed a diverse group of people in different areas- whether states or polis. They both participated
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