The quality of the thesis statement is outstanding as it is a complete sentence and makes a point without moving into the first person like I feel‚ In my opinion‚ and the rest. Furthermore‚ it conveys the topic clearly where the reader gets significant information about what ought to be discussed throughout the paper. Nevertheless‚ the thesis statement needs to outline something interesting that will make the reader salivate and have the urge to continue reading. That is‚ it needs to hold the attention
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In the 1800s there was not a high demand for highly trained‚ educated and experienced athletic directors even though high school sports were expanding. It was not until the late 1890s that the state of Michigan initiated high school sports competition for boys and then the Michigan State Athletic Association was created for years after. This establishment sparked other states like Illinois‚ Indiana‚ and New York to create their athletic associations in the early 1900s (Schneider and Stier). By 1920
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School Cheer A game was played in 1869‚ between Princeton University and Rutgers University in New Jersey‚ and by the 1880s‚ Princeton had formed an all-male pep club. In 1898‚ U of M was on a losing streak‚ and a medical student named Johnny Campbell assembled a group to energize the team and the crowd. Johnny picked up a megaphone and rallied the team to victory. Cheerleading grew from there. It wasn’t until 1923 that women were allowed to cheer for the first time. During this decade‚ cheerleaders
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Wrestling I started wrestling in sixth grade. Even though I didn’t win one of my first seven matches‚ I developed into a successful wrestler. In high school I won tournaments and beat high-quality wrestlers. During my junior year I was determined to become a great wrestler. I worked harder than ever and didn’t let anyone stop me. That year I lost the Illinois state wrestling tournament championship match by one point. Over the next six months between my junior and senior season I was runner
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Ada Vargas 9/12/12 ENGL 111-D40 Argumentative essay Sex education in high schools High schools should provide better sexual education. Prevention is better than cure. The federal government should provide more information in schools and required sex education in the first year of high school. This is important because there are a lot of sexually transmitted diseases‚ teenage pregnancy‚ and teen abortions. Boskey (2011) stated that sexually transmitted diseases (STDs) are “some of the most difficult
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My high school’s logo is a crest with four quadrants‚ each with a unique symbol‚ including a Trojan helmet‚ a book and quill‚ a harp‚ and a maple leaf. The Trojan‚ the current mascot‚ represents the community of the school‚ inside and out of the building. For community involvement‚ I became a co-president of a club that works to inform students about current political topics in an engaging‚ discussion-based setting. Not only does this club use opinions of students but brings in public figures‚ such
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Nile Ross Professor Sadnik English 101 3 October 2012 College Vs. High School Education has a tremendous role in where people end up with their life. There are various levels of education which are all important to whatever the next step is in life. Although high school is a big step to some people‚ college is an even bigger impact on people’s lives. As a result of attending both high school and college I have come to the conclusion that college is better out of the two. While
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Michael Tran Mr. Quinn English 101 19 February 2013 The Destined Loner of High School A time when I felt like an outsider was when I was eating lunch at school. My mother kept on moving around‚ so I couldn’t keep friends very long. This was one of the reasons why I ate alone during school. I didn’t mind eating solo; I just finished quick and went to the library. Throughout the years‚ I’ve gotten used to eating by myself. Some of the time‚ I was accompanied with an acquaintance I’ve met
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computers and technology‚ because sports can help students academically‚ it can help students be more organized‚ and high school sports can lead students to also playing in college. First reason why the money should go to sports‚ is that sports can help students get more involved in school. In the article: “Should Sports be eliminated from high schools”‚ the author wrote‚ “In fact‚ high school sports could benefit students academically.
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World Religion in School You may know much about the Christianity religion because it is one of the most known in America‚ but what about Hindu‚ Muslim‚ Buddha‚ Sikh‚ and Jewish worshipers; what do you really know about them? If children were taught about all the religions‚ they would know what other people believe in more and could maybe understand others on a whole new level. If you look inside religious books and prophecies we all have the same god in the end up being one person female/female
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