a) Comments about your two essays: • Which Essay was harder to write? Why? Writing the first (UC Personal Statement) essay was harder‚ because in the first draft I completely went off-topic. Before my professor’s review‚ I thought it would be a perfect essay but it was not good. I wrote a lot about my achievements but those achievements were not reflecting my personal and professional images to a reader. After the review and suggestion‚ I definitely found my way to develop topic concise and related
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give you the best chance to succeed that day‚ and I have gotten better at this over the years. Another value that this sport has brought to me is determination. It has taught me that if you want something then you need to work hard and go get it. An example of this was two years ago my high school baseball team was knocked out one game before making it to state. The next year we were determined that we were going to make it and we worked hard and were able to punch our ticket to Des Moines and compete
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50 Narrative Essay Topics 1. When I Got Lost 2. My Favorite Meal 3. If I Could Go Back in Time 4. I Saw the Weirdest Thing 5. An Animal I Would Be 6. Something I Wish I Had 7. If I Could Only See One Color 8. If I Could Change One Thing About Me 9. A Place I’d Like to Live 10. My Secret Place 11. Something Nobody Knows About Me 12. I’d Like to Invent This 13. If I Could Be Somebody Else for a Day 14. Most Interesting Animal Encounter 15. You Won’t Believe I Saw This 16. My Hero
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Tips for Drafting an Essay ( The Narrative/Descriptive Essay) 1. Begin brainstorming‚ clustering‚ and/or free writing to help you find or narrow a topic. 2. I actually like a free writing because I like to see words on a page. This is the actual beginning of a draft. Use free writing to help you figure out how much you have to say about your topic. Feel free to take parts of the free writing and elaborate on parts of your story. a. Example: if you are writing a physical story (racing in a car
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Today‚ we live in a world interwoven with women’s oppression‚ ecological degradation‚ and the exploitation of workers‚ race‚ and class. In the midst of these troubles‚ a movement known as ecofeminism appears to be gaining recognition. In the following‚ I hope to illustrate this revitalization movement . I will begin by characterizing a definition of ecofeminism; I will then bring to the forefront the ethical issues that Ecofeminism is involved with‚ then distinguish primary ideas and criticisms.
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Looking for Home Her name is Orelia Marie Degraffenaried‚ she is my grandmother. I called her Ms. Pat. I honestly don’t know where “Pat” came from. I remember hearing someone call her Patricia and ever since then I’ve called her Ms. Pat. I love everything about my grandmother‚ moreover‚ she’s my favorite person in the whole world. When I found out she was diagnosed with Alzheimer’s‚ my heart broke into a million pieces. It all started after my aunt’s death. My aunt was handicapped and my grandmother
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troubles along the way. I really just had one main problem and it was making my definition interesting enough and giving it enough claim. Having to figure out what love is not and making it flow smoothly was not a breeze to do either. Overall the essay was not hard to write about there were just a few little mistakes I had along the way that made it complicated. My main problem was trying to make my definition interesting enough and giving it enough claim. Writing on love was a great idea‚ but I
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Narrative Essay When I was in the eighth grade I went on a weeklong mission trip with my youth group to Houston‚ Texas. This trip was a turning point in my life spiritually and mentally‚ completely changing my thought process of inner city missions at the time. There is a ministry there called CSM that invites youth groups to come and they will take the group to certain places in the city where they can serve and get a feel for the need there and many places. This trip was very impacting for
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Free-Response Prompts – Wuthering Heights in-class essay These are examples of the AP open prompt from previous years. Select one of the prompts that specifically listed Wuthering Heights as a possible writing subject to deal with the given topic. You will write your in-class Wuthering Heights essay on Tuesday. To see examples of how students develop their essays using these writing prompts‚ see the .PDF file on the 2010 scoring rubric and sample essays. 1983. From a novel or play of literary merit
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History Essay ‘Thirteen Days’ Words: 825 Thirteen Days‚ a semi-bibliography of the Cuban Missile Crisis and the steps the American Government took to avoid a nuclear war. In 1962 Fidel Castro agreed to the placing of nuclear missiles belonging to the Soviets in Cuba. All placing of these missiles was done in secrecy‚ however on October 14th an American U2 plane took photographs of the missile site and the American Government was immediately informed. Thirteen Days follows the perspective of three
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