SMARTHINKING’s E-structor Response Form (Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing SMARTHINKING’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he
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Name Class Instructor Date Analysis Paper on The Blind Side Have you ever helped someone out and had your actions misread by the people around you? In the movie The Blind Side‚ based on author Michael Lewis’ book‚ The Blind Side: Evolution Of A Game‚ Leigh Anne Tuohy takes in a homeless African American teen named Michael Oher. With Leigh Anne and her family’s help Michael turns out to be an unbelievable All American football player and first round pick of the Baltimore Ravens in the 2009 NFL draft
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Reggie Princeton loved crepes. More than any burly‚ forty-something year-old man with a balding head and a beard that put the guys of Duck Dynasty to shame probably should. He loved crepes so much he’d created and cooked for a restaurant solely based around crepes for upwards of forty-something years. And now that his kids were old enough‚ they worked there in the summers too. And it’s not that Reggie didn’t love his kids‚ he did. He even liked the teenager who’d just showed up at the counter one
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India won her independence in 1947 and for winning this independence Congress‚ as a political party‚ played the predominant role. The leaders of the Congress party‚ then‚ were great leaders — stalwarts — really dedicated to the cause and to the party which they served. Mahatma Gandhi was the undisputed leader and there were leaders of such caliber as Jawahar Lai Nehru‚ Sardar Vallabhbhai Patel‚ Dr. Rajendra Prasad‚ C. Rajagopalacharya‚ Pattabhi Sitaramayya‚ Sarojini Naidu‚ Subhash Chandra Bose
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Analysis of "How Boys Become Men" Jon Katz explains why men grow up to be insensitive in his essay “How Boys Become Men.” This thesis is demonstrated both with a specific set of values for boys‚ as well as in two personal recollections. Katz draws attention to the fact that boys are expected to learn ways to handle things alone and to hide any weaknesses‚ and especially tears. The main strategy used in this essay is narration. The essay tells more than one story supporting the idea
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Abigail Alcoser & Clement Chun CJC English March 6th‚ 2015 Assignment (Analysis Essay) In the essay “Give Drugs to Addicts So We Can Be Safe”‚ by Jonah J. Goldstein‚ he does not effectively argue his point and convinces the reader‚ since he uses false comparisons‚ makes inductive generalization based on insufficient evidence‚ and bad assumptions. Johan J. Goldstein tries to affect the reader emotionally but he fails to use it properly. Instead of balancing the emotions of the readers he makes
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ECO2EEL Essay Two (Option C) Hans Christian Pedersen Student ID: 16386421 Word count: 797 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Why are designer denim shorts so expensive? As the weather has been changing for the better‚ I have been on a regular shorts hunt recently. Picky as I am‚ I have been browsing through many shops in order to find the ideal pair to be included in my summer apparel wardrobe. During my
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Life Is Short - ... For the wise people like the saints who meditate in isolation in the woods or the people who create aims‚ targets they want to fulfill; make a list of to-do-things or the life-is-fun people who just want to have fun all the time thinking when you’re dead‚ you’re dead; when you’re alive‚ you live to the full‚ life is too short‚ time flows at a speed greater than the speed of light. They oppose the centuries old science which tells us that nothing can travel faster than time. They
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My Short and Sweet English Class I took EN 101 class in the spring semester in 2013 after I finished English language courses. Before the first English class started‚ I worried about myself if I would do well in the English class. I was also poor at English. Even though there were difficulties of writing various types of essays‚ I improved grammar ability and my writing skills by learning the rules of grammar and the writing process in detail. I wrote four types of essays: argument‚ narrative
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Short Story Unit Plan By: Steve McCauley & Bruce Robinson Subject: English Unit: Short Story Theme: Irony Short Story Unit Contents: Short Story Unit Overview Lesson 1 – Elements of the Short Story Lesson 2 – Cask of Amontillado Lesson 3 – The Lottery Lesson 4 – A & P Lesson 5 – Gentlemen‚ Your Verdict Lesson 6 – Short Story Workshop Lesson 7 – The Big Snit Lesson 8 – The Sniper Lesson 9 – The Fall of a City Lesson 10 – The Secret Life of Walter Mitty Lesson 11 – Two Fishermen Lessons
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