changes to the language aspects and referencing style only. Use IEEE referencing style. The main objective is to show your ability to use words introduced. Use different words‚ but belong to the same category‚ to replace the following words that can be found in the results and discussion: 1. Quantity words 2. Invitation to view result vocabulary 3. Causality words 4. Comparison with previous studies vocabulary 5. Recommendations for improvement or future study vocabulary 3. Results and discussion
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It is a great paragraph and well-written. The only changes I see are some minor corrections‚ but I would not change your paragraph as to its content. There is some punctuation that might make it easier to read. Your sentence structure is complex and with so many commas I had to read the sentence beginning with Boo twice. You might want to consider using colons‚semi-colons‚ dashes in such complex sentences. In your opening you need to hyphenate six-year old Scout. I think African-American should
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On the surface I think I am like most young and modern American women: I take school seriously‚ I have dreams and goals for the future that I am determined to make happen‚ and I don’t expect anyone to do the hard work for me. I come from what is an increasingly normal background: my parents are divorced and I live with my mom and sisters and only occasionally see my dad since he now lives on the other side of the country‚ but I still feel very lucky to have a supportive‚ if spread out‚ family behind
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formal letter 22 Road Street Cambridge CB21 17 May 2011 Town Gazette Human Resources Department 29 West Station Way Hypermarket HY23 5GC Application for the position in administration Dear Sir or Madam‚ I am writing to apply for the position of The Town Gazzete administrator‚ which was advertised in the local newspaper. I am really interested in media and I want to join your professional work team. As you will notice on the attached CV‚ I have graduated from Bronx Academy High School
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Since I have decided to become a better volleyball player‚ I will condition and study the sport. First‚ every day I will go to the gym‚ run for fifteen minutes to help with my endurance and lift weights every other day‚ such as squatting and deadlifting. By going to the gym‚ it will help me to keep up with my more advanced volleyball friends during long rallies and long games. In order to help with my volleyball skills‚ I plan on going to local San Jose open gyms. At the open gyms‚ I will focus on
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300 Word Essay I chose freedom of religion because it is the one bill of rights that I believe has the broadest expansion in the constitution. I believe that everyone has the right to believe in a supernatural belief. That is why we have the establishment clause and the free-exercise clause. Which were established to keep the government from interfering with the exercise of religion. But in today’s time the government does have the right to limit the practice of a religion‚ but you still have
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Word Ladders In Word Ladders‚ as in Making Words‚ students are guided to build a series of words as the teacher points out decoding‚ spelling‚ and word-meaning clues about the words. However‚ in word ladders‚ the letters used for each new word come from the previous word‚ rather than from a preselected word bank. Students add‚ subtract‚ or change one or more letters from the previous word to make new words based on clues from the teacher. Usually‚ words are listed vertically so that students
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teachers that mention non-standard English such as taboo words in their classroom. What are taboo words? Taboo words are“sanctioned or restricted on both institutional and individual levels under the assumption that some harm will occur if a taboo word is spoken. The exact nature of harm to befall the speaker‚ listener‚ or society has never been entirely clear” (Heins‚ 2007). We use taboo wordsto be emotionally expressive‚ but people use taboo words with their friends to show the depth of their relationship
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100 Best / Favorite Movies of All Time: Halfway through writeups on my Top 100 movies. At this rate‚ I should be done around 20041.Godfather 2. Pacino was never better. The First Godfather is a great story. Godfather 2 is a great film. By bookending the first Godfather‚ we get 2 great actors‚ Pacino and Deniro‚ telling the story of America in the 20th century. Young‚ruthless and honorable‚ Vito Corleone is every immingrant who has had to fight in the land of opportunity. Older‚ ruthless‚ jaded and
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satellite launch vehicle) and GSLV(geosynchronous launch vehicle). the PSLV is mainly designed for placing satellites in polar orbits and GSLV in geostationary orbits Though ISRO facing some difficulties in GSLV it will overcome the issues within short span
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