Jenna Newton 9/10/13 English I have used revision in past writing in school when I was writing my final essay last year and you had to cover all of the important parts of that course. I was so confident that I did cover all the important points‚ but after I handed it in I remembered I forgot a part and so I went back and revised it. Outside of school I used it when I was writing my job application. On the application it says to describe yourself‚ so I started off to a good start but then
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make them feel bad at your funeral? Believe it or not‚ this is what some of the children who were interviewed by the Nationwide Coalition to End Child Abuse want to do. The question is: “Why would such heart-breaking thoughts like these appear in the mind of these kids?”. The answer is ‘bad parenting’. Bad parenting‚ along with its negative effects on children and society‚ raise the question: “Should people be required to get a license in order to become parents?”. I know some might laugh at this
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The 1986 film "Sixteen Candles" tells a timeless tale of growing up in suburban America. The film’s star‚ Sam‚ played by Molly Ringwald‚ wakes up with big expectations on her sweet sixteenth birthday only to be completely disappointed. Not only does she find that she looks exactly the same as when she was fifteen‚ but her family is so preoccupied with her older sister’s wedding that they forget her birthday altogether. The film opens with Sam on the phone with her best girlfriend Randy. She
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are passing away due to car accidents is steadily increasing‚ which is a very bad thing. Driving is a big hazard as it is. Therefore‚ their should be a cut off age that states when people no longer have the eligibility to drive. Many people would agree that there should be a law for the cut off age of driving. Adults should be restricted from driving after the age of 60‚ and shouldn’t be able to get there license renewed for the safety of others. To begin with‚ many may argue that the elderly will
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How Children should be raised Today‚ many parents attempt to raise their children to be perfect and therefore many children feel insecure and that they are forced into an education. However‚ this correlation between parents’ method of upbringing and children’s childhoods has caused great debate throughout the last couple of years. The first text is a response to the article‚ Why Chinese mothers are superior. The article is written by Amy Chua. Amy’s daughter‚ Sophia Chua-Rubenfield wrote a reply
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Because of safety concerns‚ many states have increased the age at which teens can begin to drive. The state legislature is considering raising the minimum driving age from 16 to 18. I do have a opinion on this subject. I am in the age group of these teenagers which the age is trying to be raised. The driving age should not be raised. The driving age shouldn’t be raised because at the age of 16 you can be working. A driver’s license will allow a teenager to have transportation. The transportation
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The Driving Age Should the driving age be raised to the age of 18? My answer is no‚ because there is not that great of a difference in maturity between the age of 16 and the age of 18. I got my permit and began driving at the age of 15. By doing so I had almost a year of driving experience‚ with a parent‚ by the time I turned 16. I got my drivers license when I turned 16‚ and my parents bought me my first car. In my own opinion I believe I am a pretty decent driver. I have never been in a wreck
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Students Should Be Required to Take Physical Education Courses Would you want your child to be overweight‚ have bad sportsmanship and cooperation? What about your child to be stressed or depressed? Some students in schools today are not required to take Physical Education courses which negatively affect children. 13.2% of Mexican-American girls four to five years old are classified as over-weight according to a University of Michigan study on Physical Education in America’s schools. Also coming
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Schools have been duelling over this topic should student athletes have to attend physical education‚ to that the response is very simple the answer is no. Athlete kids also have to get some school help after school.Don’t kids get enough physical education in practices or games? Well to some schools the answer is no‚ but facts show that kids have a way more advanced education when they don’t have to go to practice and physical education every day. In fact‚ if athletes have their practice during
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irresponsible and not able to decide on their own for the most part. In the United States‚ it is not until the age of 21 that young adults are seen as mature people to make life changing decisions. It is not until this age that people are allowed legally drink. However‚ this law is most times ignored as teens involve in drinking behavior at a much earlier age. On the other end‚ at a much younger age‚ they are allowed to choose a president and die for their country. The fact that young people are not allowed
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