wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he suffers the most important conflict between desire and duty in O’Brien’s story. Below I suggest some improvements to your thesis statement‚ conclusion‚ and comma use to help you enhance your paper. The ERF and embedded comments include the draft being on topic and grammatically correct as in “Help Requested.” So here we go!
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a chair. I took the kitten reluctantly and nursed him back to good health. The kitten grew into a cat named Toughie‚ who loved us‚ his family‚ and was protective of us. We did not need a dog as we had a watch cat! The cat would put the run on a drunken man‚ who bought pure vanilla at the store to drink. We lived at a grader station‚ where my husband worked for the government in highway maintenance. Toughie once walked into the grader station where the visiting superintendent and the foreman were
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STORY OF NATIVITY About two thousand years ago‚ in the town of Nazareth‚ there lived a young woman named Mary. She was engaged to be married to Joseph‚ a carpenter. One day an angel appeared before her and told her she had been chosen to have a special baby. The baby would be God’s son and she must call him Jesus. Soon after the angel’s visit‚ Mary and Joseph were married. Mary was due to have her baby when they were told they had to go on a long journey to Bethlehem‚ which was where Joseph came
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Cari’s Story A.) How could an infection in Cari’s nasal passages and pharynx spread into her sinuses? The infection in Cari’s nasal passages and pharynx was able to spread into her sinuses due to the sinuses being a drainage area for the nasal passages. B.) What is the couch reflex? Describe the process that Cari’s respiratory system is using to clear her lungs by coughing. The cough reflex is used to clear sputum and irritants that are in the nasal passages and pharynx. There are cilia in
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Lillian FleetonOctober 21‚ 2014 Cari’s story How can an infection in Cari nasal passages and pharyns spread into her sinuses? The infection in Cari’s nasal passages and pharynx was able to spread into her sinuses due to the sinuses being a drainage area for the nasal passages. What is the cough reflex? Describe the process that Cari’s respiratory system is using to clear her lungs by coughing. The cough reflex is used to clear sputum and irritants that are in the nasal passages and pharynx
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The Story of Crossing Amongst today’s society there seems to be plenty of judgment. Wherever you go it is quite easy to find someone whom will ask or tell you ‘why are you wearing that shirt’‚ or ‘why do you speak with an accent.’ People do not accept others whom do not fit the stereotypical American. In doing so this creates many cultural differences and problems between ethnicities. Some of these problems most definitely include discrimination which can lead to high self consciousness. Much
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Nicole Banley ENG 125 David Schonfeld 04.07.2013 I believe the theme of the story is that Sophia feels it is her right to explore her sexuality however she pleases and to have an independent life‚ no matter what her father thinks. The writer uses setting to narrow the underlying idea‚ the theme. In this story‚ there are two different settings. The first one is in Sophia’s father’s home where she gets scolded for having love letters. Her father finds them and asks if she has been deflowered
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Krrish 3 From Wikipedia‚ the free encyclopedia Krrish 3 Theatrical release poster Directed by Rakesh Roshan Produced by Rakesh Roshan Screenplay by Rakesh Roshan Honey Irani Robin Bhatt Story by Rakesh Roshan Narrated by Amitabh Bachchan Starring Hrithik Roshan Vivek Oberoi Priyanka Chopra Kangna Ranaut Music by Songs: Rajesh Roshan Background Score: Salim-Sulaiman Cinematography S. Tirru Editing by Chandan Arora Distributed by Filmkraft Productions Pvt. Ltd Release date(s)
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AP2630 Unit 6 Case Study 1: Chloe’s Story Date: October 27‚ 2014 Which serous membrane in Chloe’s abdomen most likely contains the greatest amount of adipose tissue? The peritoneum is the largest serous membrane of the body and it contains the greater omentum‚ the largest peritoneal fold. The greater omentum generally contains a considerable amount of adipose tissue. The adipose tissue can greatly expand with weight gain What involuntary muscular process initiated by deglutition of water may
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Long ago‚ there was a newly trained warrior from across the seas of Antonica‚ the race of the forgotten iksar being newly re-discovered had begun the life of one iksar. This neophyte warrior’s name was Lyzzard. Lyzzard trained outside of his hometown killing scorpions and scaled wolf pups until he gained the level of 5. At this time he was getting bored of the creatures that inhabited the outside area of the gates of Cabilis and noticed that the road lead down into a pit. When Lyzzard decided
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