April‚ Thank you for sharing your story. I’ll admit‚ I was hesitant to read it because I hate thinking about funerals. However‚ I wanted to give you some feedback‚ so here I am. 1. To make it seem more realistic‚ I would add dialogue. This ties into your question #3. I don’t think that all stories need tons of dialogue‚ but to me‚ it feels like I’m getting a lot of backstory before I ever see anything from the character’s point of view. Maybe add past of someone’s eulogy? I’ve been to one funeral
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also be someone who is retired living just round the next corner of our street‚ and giving a friendly smile when I pass by‚ it could be anyone or might just be a waving friend who is on his way to work‚ while leaving their footprints on peoples heart‚ and their footsteps echoing down the dusky lane…. As you might not expect this‚ but the first thing I would search for in a friend is a rib-tickling nature‚ one who does not feel bad for anything‚ it is not only valuable for your problems but you also
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She woke up to the sight of her small but spacious bedroom. As she got up from bed the burning sun beam through the window down on her‚ causing gold blindness. She walks around her mess of clothes on the floor and walk to the bathroom to brush her teeth. After she finished brushing her teeth‚ she walks to the neat‚ tumblr‚ fresh white painted bedroom to wake her sister up to get to school on time. She shrugs her while saying “wake up”. Her sister woke up with a messy frizzy hair and reply with a
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The Way You Look (at me) Tonight was a performance done by Jess Curtis and Claire Cunningham. The performance brought up very important themes throughout the entire piece. The major theme I took from this performance is love. Love was talked about and there was movement to help correlate with it. The dancers would speak on a subject and it would shortly be followed by a movement. This performance was very thought provoking and heartwarming. There were many little pieces each of them preformed to
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Telecom Regulatory Authority of India The Indian Telecom Services Performance Indicators April - June‚ 2012 New Delhi‚ India 11th October‚ 2012 Mahanagar Doorsanchar Bhawan‚ Jawahar Lal Nehru Marg‚ New Delhi-110002 Tel: +91-11- 23230752‚ Fax: +91-11- 23236650 Website: www.trai.gov.in Disclaimer The Information and Statistics contained in this report are derived from variety of sources‚ but are mainly reliant on data obtained from Service Providers. This report does not constitute
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Titile: Someone Like You Author: Sarah Dessen Date of Publication: 1998 Number Of Pages: 281 I checked out this book titled Someone Like You by Sarah Dessen. I chose this book because I read a different book by Sarah Dessen and well the last book was good and somewhat interesting. But I also chose this book because a friend of mine recommended it to me and because this author writes good girl teen fiction books. The author of this book is named Sarah Dessen and was born in Illinois on 1970
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If you could spend a day with anyone in the world‚ past or present‚ who would you choose and why? RICHMOND UNI ENTRY ESSAY WRITTEN 14/11/12 ON APPICATION TO THE UNI I have chosen Robert Kennedy the brother of the American President J.F Kennedy for many reasons. Time magazine 5 May 1988 described him as “The Last hero” People spend money to listen to motivational speakers and if I had the chance I would spend the day with Robert Kennedy because I ‘am greatly inspired by his life. He once said in
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generations. About 1.96 billion people in the world use social media to be connected‚ yet the majority still feel alone. To keep on living under this false consciousness could only lead to desolation. As Gary Turk explained‚ in his Spoken Word Video “Look Up‚” that all of this technology that many people obtained is just an illusion. He continued on to say that “I have 422 friends‚ yet I’m lonely. I speak to all of them everyday‚ yet none
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#6:Treasure Chest Problem: Someone offers to give you a million dollars($1‚000‚000) in one-dollar ($1) bills. To receive the money‚ you must lie down; the million one-dollar bills will be placed on your stomach. If you keep them on your stomach for 10 minutes‚ the money is yours! Do you accept the offer? Solution: Each dollar bill weighs 1 gram‚ if we multiply 1gram by 1‚000‚000 dollars we get a weight of 1‚000‚000 grams. If there are 454 grams in a pound then $1‚000‚000 will equal 2202 pounds
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mother raised my brother and I the way my grandmother raised her. I have been taught that honesty‚ integrity‚ hard work‚ and respect should be constituted into daily living‚ and to get what we want in life‚ we have to earn it. Although I wasn’t brought up in a life of splendor‚ I acknowledge that I live a comfortable lifestyle due to the hard work and effort my mother put into her life. Her perseverance is an example I want to follow. Coming from a large family with very little education and financial
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