English Writing Essay Evaluation Read the following TWO essays thoroughly. Decide which of them is more appropriate according to how a good essay should be. Essay (A) A Special Place 1 Sometimes‚ childhood memories come flooding in. I often drift back to my younger days spent in an old tree house. 2 Our tree house was a terrific place. It was built of discarded lumber and sat eight feet off the ground. It had various-sized fence posts for steps. A long‚ thick rope hung next to the steps. We used the
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sweet fragrance along with the trees swaying is hypotonic in their rhythm. The gentle babbling of a slow flowing creek‚ Crackling and bubbling as it flows down stream with its crystal clear water‚ shows no signs of ever being touched by man. My special place overwhelms me with feelings by the flooding of senses. It is here in the calm of the day‚ the senses come alive and every sense is heightened. Even the hairs on the back of ones neck alert to something out of the ordinary. One can hear
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Love is important that is in all of people not from who is valued as low rank to who is valued as high rank as king. Even how much money they have they have to know love ต่ำต้อย ถึง ยิ่งใหญ่ The author tries to tell everything such as tree‚ ant‚ fly‚ spark is necessary to have Small things Even they are small things‚ but it is necessary to have because the nature determine what will be or happen First stanza – Nature of love Second stanza – Love is smooth‚ relationship‚ ความรักน่ะ ได้ยิน
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My love for Africa Hello everyone my name is Tulsi Amin and I attend South University at the West Palm Beach Campus in Florida. I have been to many different places in my life and in fact I have stayed in three different continents as of now. I was born in India moved to Kenya when I was two and final destination is America since the age of 10. Africa is where I consider my childhood where I learned to play with butterflies saw talking parrots and was visited by wild monkeys frequently in my
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Finding ones place in America can be difficult at a young age because most teenagers in high school do not necessarily have their life planned out just yet. In high school‚ us students are still trying to find our place in our normal every day life with our teachers and peers. Every day we walk down the halls of our high schools‚ completing our school day and getting closer and closer to our graduation date. We all have a general idea of what we want to do with our lives‚ but none of us know for
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Have you ever returned to place and asked yourself “Boy I miss those days” !We all return to a place that holds many memoires‚ good or bad. For every person‚ some places hold great importance in their lives. A special place that is really important to me is my home country‚ Somalia. Somalia‚ most notably‚ Kismayo‚ is my birthplace and a place that I hold dearly in my heart. So many childhood memories of me and my family occurred in kismayo. All of my brothers‚ including myself‚ were all born in
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Cuba is the place and country that I would always return‚ even if I live in any part of the world. Cuba is the island that saw me born‚ it is the country where I have my best memories of my childhood‚ where I was reunited with my family‚ my friends and it was where I first went to school. When I talk about Cuba‚ so many memories come to my mind that I think I would never finish writing about because despite the system and the government that exists in Cuba‚ I can say that I was happy the years I
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exhilarating for me when another person’s benefit is the goal. This is because the satisfaction of surmounting a difficulty is compounded by the joy of having improved someone else’s life on an individual level‚ thereby making the world a better place. One place that I’ve experienced this sense of purpose is Camp Nageela. Camp Nageela is a charity funded camp designed to provide a warm‚ accepting environment for children from underprivileged backgrounds who are all alike in their universal need for
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My son birthday special place Always on my son’s birthday we are doing something special. This year we surprise him with trip to Legoland. Although he had been there before‚ he still loves it. Also on this day‚ for first time‚ they hosted a firework extravaganza. It was school time that I had plenty of time to organize the visit. I invited his best friends: Katie‚ who is a year older than him‚ and Daniel - eleven-year-old boy‚ living next door. I bought some threats for all of us. In the morning
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people have discussed whether autistic children or teens should be placed in regular classes‚ given special aides‚ or if they should be placed in special classes. In the book‚ The Spark‚ by Kristine Barnett‚ it talks about how Kristine’s son‚ Jacob‚ otherwise known as Jake‚ and how he was diagnosed with autism at age two‚ yet he overcame all of the stereotypes placed on autistic children. Jacob was in special ed class‚ but his mother pulled him out because he was not making any progress. She decided to
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