PRESENTATIOn Someone Who Has Influenced My LifeI am writing an essay for my English class and keep getting an E what am i doin wrong? In life you have many people who influence you. Some aare good influences and some are bad influences. Although‚ the one person who influenced my life most would have to be my father. My father sacrificed alot in his lifetime to make his children’s lives better. I adore my father he is a strong confident man and loves his family
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April‚ Thank you for sharing your story. I’ll admit‚ I was hesitant to read it because I hate thinking about funerals. However‚ I wanted to give you some feedback‚ so here I am. 1. To make it seem more realistic‚ I would add dialogue. This ties into your question #3. I don’t think that all stories need tons of dialogue‚ but to me‚ it feels like I’m getting a lot of backstory before I ever see anything from the character’s point of view. Maybe add past of someone’s eulogy? I’ve been to one funeral
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What does it take to be a good person? Lane and Sherri are very religious people. Lane and Sherri met at campus ministries in their third year in college. When Sherri and Lane found out that she is pregnant‚ both were lost and don’t know what to do. Sherri was torn between her decisions and the morality of terminating the pregnancy. Sherri is also torn between wrong and right; evil and good because of her faith. Sherri also wonders if Lane loves her enough to be with her. Sherri asked in prayer for
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WALKING TO IMPROVE HEALTH Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience to start walking in order to improve their health. Central Idea: Regular walking can improve both your mental and physical health. Introduction Let’s be honest‚ we lead an easy life: automatic dishwashers‚ riding lawnmowers‚ T.V. remote controls‚ automatic garage door openers‚ power screwdrivers‚ bread machines‚ electric pencil sharpeners. We live in a time-saving‚ energy-saving‚ convenient society. It’s a wonderful life
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Eminem’s “My Name is/Guilty Conscience” mash-up performance at the 1999 MTV Video Music Awards concert constituted a breakthrough performance. The set opened with Eminem‚ dressed in baggy pants‚ an oversized white tee‚ a backwards baseball cap and a Nike‚ hoodie with the ironic label‚ “Role Model” flashing across his chest in LED lights. In front of mobile home cutouts and an LED “Trailer Park” sign‚ Eminem rapped his 1999 single‚ “My Name Is‚” which introduced his alter ego‚ the hedonistic‚ misogynistic
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SWOT Analysis Content of SWOT are include: Strengths‚ Weaknesses‚ Opportunities and Threats. This fourth point is the basic information to give us knows about the company circumstances. If the company knows about theirs SWOT‚ this will help them to improve or avoid some problem before this happen. According to Mazda Company‚ got four points to explain; even they have a lot of strength. First point is talking about their worker‚ their worker are professional because Mazda Company provide
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In the novel My Name is Asher Lev‚ by Chaim Potok; the reader is exposed to the conflict within an Orthodox Hasidic Jewish boy. In the beginning of this novel‚ Asher is able to balance his religious teachings with his desire to draw. His desire to draw causes Asher‚ to behave impulsively when he is younger and eventually Asher decides that his need to express himself through drawing is more important that the teachings of his religion. The elders in his faith are often disappointed and upset with
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Victor Taft Chapter summary # 1 (Gender inequality) What is gender? Gender is the personal traits and life chances that a society links to being female or male. But gender is more than that it something that in most parts of the world defines you before you can even define yourself. Gender is sometimes confused with sex‚ but sex is just a biological thing while gender is something that society defines and only humans posses. There is something called gender stratification that is the unequal
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day because I am repeating myself for every class. When I asked my parents why they named me Alexander‚ it took them sometime to come up with the answer of‚ “We just liked the name.” I went on to research the difference between the names of Alexander and Alex‚ even though they are much the same‚ the names have different meanings. Alexander‚ to me‚ does not fit me as well as Alex for multiple reasons. As simple as the name Alex is‚ Alex also has a simple definition. According to babynames
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truly know us for who we really are; are the people that have the most influence in our lives‚ such as our parents. In my case it is my mother who has greatly impacted my life. She has stood beside me through thick and thin. I know that as long as she is here on this earth‚ she will stand beside me to love and support me unconditionally as she has done all these years. It is because of her that I am the person I am today. Behind my choices‚ character‚ my values‚ and behind me‚ proudly stands my mother
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