Overall I liked your write up you did a good job. I did offer some micro and macro suggestions below. I did copy and paste your document into word and it appears to be short of the five and a half page minimum? I also highlighted in red some spelling issues and sentence structure issues for your consideration. 1. What is the writer’s claim? * The writers claim is that asthma should be considered a disability in the workforce. 2. What three reasons does the writer give in support
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Sport Media The first thing I notice when I open the website are the scores to the MLB games. I decided to visit ESPN because that is the sport media website I visit the most. ESPN changes their main focus depending on the date. For example‚ during different sport seasons there will be different headlines. The NFL goes from Septemeber to January(sometimes February). However‚ it is not always NFL during those months. Football is played on Thursday‚ Sunday‚ and Monday. Occasionally there will be
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At 7:30 pm‚ people started walking in to the theater‚ just a few minutes after‚ the audience seats filled with the crowed people who come to support the dancer‚ or maybe interested in dance performance‚ and mostly have “dance appreciation fever” like me. After the introduction of director‚ all the lights dimed down and the curtain slide up. The light focuses in the middle of the proscenium stage where there are group of seven dancers sat down in the middle of the stage ready to perform. They started
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ASSIGNMENT COVER Course code: PSY 311 Course name: Writing and critical thinking Assignment title: Reflection paper on a writing process Instructor’s name: Dr. Dawn Stevens Student’s name: Efstratios Boumpouras Date: April 15‚ 2013 Comments: Grade: Reflection paper on a writing process Efstratios Boumpouras City Unity College PSY 311 Writing and critical thinking Dawn Stevens April 15‚ 2013 Reflection paper on a writing
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tempo and I didn’t mind listening to them. Some of the other songs were kind of boring and a drag to listen to. The songs sounded like very traditional songs that should be appreciated. Being in this class and going to this performance allowed me to recognize different things with music that I wasn’t able to before. I am able to recognize more instruments than before. I am also able to recognize the beats‚ meters‚ and tempo better than before. I still have room for improvement but
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wore the enlisted dress uniform‚ which consisted of white clothes and a black tie with a white cover. The concert etiquette was informal. The concert opened suddenly with a high chord of the clarinets and then with the sound of flutes. This remind me the class were we studied the pitch: the highness or lowness of sound.
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Intelligence vs. Brain size Project 2: Data Collection College Algebra 161 November 15‚ 2012 Intelligence vs. Brain size The Data Collection project was designed to teach students how to collect‚ and organize‚ describe and document data using Excel lists and graphs. I chose this particular subject to research to further my understanding of the evolution of human species. “Can intelligence and brain size be directly related‚ and as intelligence increases‚ what happens to the size of our brains
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Some call it “horror” and some call it “the super germ”‚ but now‚ our always known “regular” bacteria‚ those one-celled creatures once considered under control with antibiotics‚ have invaded our hospitals and headlines with a vengeance. The vengeance used against us is caused by an existing organism called necrotizing fasciitis‚ the so-called flesh-eating bacteria‚ caused by Group A streptococcus. What this organism does is progressively destroy the human body
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Running head: Research Analysis and Article Critique Research Analysis and Article Critique Kellee Holland EDD/711 Student discipline and classroom management are among the highest concerns of teachers‚ administrators‚ and community members. Classroom management defeat is one of the most common reasons that teachers change professions. The School wide Positive Behavioral Support program is an approach that schools are implementing to prevent behavioral problems. About 7‚500 schools across
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Kloo‚ A.‚ & Zigmand‚ N. (2008). Coteaching revisited: Redrawing the blueprint. Preventing School Failure‚ 52(2)‚ 12-20. The authors’ focus in this article is defining‚ evaluating‚ endorsing and improving the practice of co-teaching. As they state early on‚ co-teaching is the most commonly used format for delivering special education services to students with disabilities. This increase in co-teaching is a direct result of the reauthorization of the Individuals with Disabilities Education
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