needing nonspecific revisions‚ and red italics are commentary.) I know I’m pretty harsh‚ but just remember if I didn’t want you to do well I would do less… Comparative Critique: Ways of Seeing by John Berger and There is no Unmarked Woman by Deborah Tannen Once upon a time‚ (I’d stay way from this… perhaps) a group of dodo birds inhabited an island in the Indian Ocean. The men (males—men refers to humans) were large and colorful with fearless attitudes(‚) while the women (smaller females) were
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WHO GETS THE HEART? Daniela Acevedo Castillo José Manuel Solís Bulos RANKING 1. MARTHA ROSALES •. SHOULD: She has the perfect age‚ she has to take care of three kids. •. SHOULDN’T: Other people need it more. 2. LEONID GROMYKOVITCH •. SHOULD: He is an important person in the U.S. government‚ he is the only one taking care of his kids. •. SHOULDN’T: He is a little bit old for the heart. 3. SOOHAN KIM • SHOULD: He has an entire life to live. • SHOULDN’T: There are people who have children and need
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brain runs on the same amount of energy as a 10-watt light bulb‚ sending and receiving nerve impulses that travel nearly 170 miles per hour. When my eyes glanced over the options of the six potential owners of a new heart‚ my brain told me exactly who it would be. The heart should go to John Williams‚ though he may not be the best person he is the most beneficial. Now I know what you are thinking: “Why?” Well‚ my fellow Board of Directors let me tell you. Archibald McFarland is 70 years old and
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I Believe My Mother Loved Me When I was four‚ I killed my mother. My mom was cleaning out the closet and my dad came in and got mad at her. There was a fight and a gun. I grabbed the gun and heard a boom. I didn’t know it then but I know now that I was the one who killed my mother. Why was she cleaning out the closet? Why was there a gun? I ask myself these questions all the time. My father says that she didn’t love me and she left us. I don’t think that is true. I think my mother loved me. I ask
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The “Song of Deborah” is one of the most famous songs in Jewish history. The song‚ sung by two of the heros of the story‚ Deborah and her husband Barak‚ begins by praising Hashem. It states Hashem’s name “Adoni” five times in the first four lines of the song‚ mentioning some cherry picked miracles he had performed. For instance it mentions the earth quaking and the heavens opening up. After the introductory praise of Hashem‚ the state of the Jewish people is examined. It says that deliverance had
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Benjamin McClendon Aaron Bremyer English 1102 4/19/13 Heard but Not Seen In Raymond Carver’s “Cathedral”‚ one of the most unexpected forms of communication touched upon was the ham radio. The ham radio represents the idea of communication throughout the story. Even though this radio is touched upon only once and even then barely‚ it is more significant than the other forms of communication mentioned in the story. It connects one of the main characters to the rest of the world. One can find
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Whos Got The Power? It is very easy to see that Macbeth and Lady Macbeth are a political power couple‚ Macbeth is the Thane of Glamis and Cawdor. He is also in the running to be the next king of Scotland‚ but is this a case of smoke and mirrors? Could it be possible that the real power player is Lady Macbeth‚ But do with the fact she is a woman she manipulates Macbeth in to doing what she wants? Macbeth’s ambitions are very similar to Lady Macbeth’s ambition‚ but there is one key difference “This
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Being Heard Being heard is something important because it gives your audience a chance to see different sides of yourself. Being heard could do as little as make someone feel content or very important. Listening to one another could be very useful in that we obtain information‚ understand‚ listen for enjoyment and last but not least learn. In a recent article that I’ve read‚ “Talking a stranger through the night” by Sherry Amatenstein‚ a great portion of the message that she sends out‚ has all
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Who Gets The Heart? Who deserves the gift of life? These are five patients who are worthy of having this heart transplant. This has been one of the toughest decisions in my career as a doctor‚ but I have made a choice. I’ve decided that Helen is the best candidate for this surgery. I feel this way partly because‚ her kids are at a stage in their life where they need their mothers care and the others aren’t good choices for a few reasons. But this is not the main reason for my choice. Above all
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young Private‚ Robert Shurtliff "…was always mentioned in glowing terms as being one of the toughest‚ strongest‚ and most patriotic soldiers… Shurtliff ’s physical endurance was legendary" (Leonard). In contrast‚ the inexperienced‚ eighteen-year-old Deborah Sampson rarely received compliments nor stood out among the beauties of Plympton and Middleborough‚ Massachusetts. These two seemingly-different personages have much more in common that one might imagine. In the late Eighteenth Century‚ women had
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