Overall I liked your write up you did a good job. I did offer some micro and macro suggestions below. I did copy and paste your document into word and it appears to be short of the five and a half page minimum? I also highlighted in red some spelling issues and sentence structure issues for your consideration. 1. What is the writer’s claim? * The writers claim is that asthma should be considered a disability in the workforce. 2. What three reasons does the writer give in support
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What you are doing is looking at the toy in terms of finding what it provides and evaluating whether this provision is good or not‚ in terms of development and other things that support children. Also things like safety‚ price etc. So you could make a checklist of things like is it ?: appealing to children‚ durable safe age appropriate developmentally supportive ( I would elabaorate on this by looking at each developmental area and/or at specific things like how a climbing frame could support
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The works various‚ unique curvy geometric shapes and array of many bright colors makes the work standout. The work immediately catches the eye‚ it is very appealing. Throughout the work there is a variety of vibrant hues such as yellow‚ orange‚ purple‚ green‚ blue‚ turquoise‚ and pink that creates a repetitive geometric pattern. The work uses both primary and secondary colors and combines warm and cool colors to create contrast. With so many creative colors it helps each individual one attract attention
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Many criticisms can be heard or read of the Obama administration‚ especially if coming from the Republicans. But something must be to consider‚ Obama broke with many state policies of Bush Jrs‚ especially in foreign policy towards Latin America. A thorough analysis of whether Obama is more pragmatic and less ideological than Bush jrs. But there is something that differentiates the foreign policy of Obama and his predecessor. Obama seeks to defend human rights and democracy in Latin America‚ seeks
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Hailey Davis JMC - 1013 Introduction to Mass Communications 22nd September 2015 Description: The segment starts out with Bill Whitaker talking about the Cleveland Division’s effect to repair the relationship between them and the community. Bill then is seen interviewing Cleveland Police Chief Calvin Williams‚ where he bluntly asks Williams if there are bad guys in their P.D. Williams answers - “Of course there are. And it’s my job to weed out the bad people from this division..” It is evident
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Research Article Critique The objective of this study which was conducted by two professors at Witchita State University‚ Cathleen A. Lewandowski and Twyla J. Hill was to evaluate whether social and emotional supports influenced the successful completion of drug treatment amongst women. The study was conducted in a non-profit agency which provided comprehensive drug abuse treatment in programs that were specifically designed for women. Although the facility in which the study took place was
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EVALUATION TEST I I. Complete the sentences with the correct words. 1) Jim’s really_____________. He hates meeting new people. shy sensitive extrovert 2) Julia sometimes gets ________ if she’s not allowed todo what she wants. sensible moody mean 3) You’re too ________. Please let me pay this time! generous honest sensitive 4) Debra was very ________ tonight. Do you think she’s OK? extrovert shy quiet 5) Dave’s just ________ because you got a higher score in the test yesterday. ambitious
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JOURNAL ARTICLE CRITIQUE Attila Uregen THEO 525 LUO (Spring 2013) L23074511 January 19‚ 2013 CONTENTS I. Introduction 1 II. Summary……………………………………………………………………………….. III. Critical Interaction…………………………………………………………………….2 IV. Conclusion…………………………………………………………………………….3 BIBLIOGRAPHY 4 I. Introduction This article reflects the work of and lecture delivered at the University of Notre Dame on October 15 1990 by Professor Dr. Nicholas Lobkowicz. The article titled “Christianity and Culture”
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A Qualitative Research Critique The purpose of this paper is to critique the research article‚ “Gulper. Et. Al’s Preventing belt restraint use in newly admitted residents in nursing homes: A quasi-experimental study. The incident I am going to discuss in this paper is of Mr. P.‚ an 85-year-old man‚ admitted to this facility about a year ago. His history includes coronary heart disease‚ cataract‚ dementia‚ hypertension‚ macular degeneration and Alzheimer’s. Mr P. scored 28 of 30 on the Folstein
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Perhaps the key difference between between financial lack and wealth is not merely hard work or superior intelligence‚ but the ability to delay gratification. What can the Marshmallow Test teach you about personal finance? Avoid looking at marshmallows when you’re hungry During the Marshmallow Test‚ some successful kids reportedly covered their eyes so they couldn’t see the tempting treat. Avoid temptation-- stay away from the mall when you’re bored. Save a marshmallow today and you’ll
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