English 203 sect. 11 February 8‚ 2016 Solution to Writing Problems Both texts “Shitty First Drafts” and “Why I Revise” are about why it is necessary to review your writings before using them. “Shitty First drafts” gives the authors thoughts off to explain on why first drafts are necessary. “Why I revise” is about how revision is a necessary step in order to help one become a better writer. “Shitty first drafts” explains throughout the story about how unlikely it is that someone will just write something
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single prominent entity is the main focus of attention. An example would be “Draft horse is one you get on tap instead of Ø in a bottle.” In this case‚ we do not see an explicit pronoun that says who is found “in a bottle”. The indefinite singular pronoun one refers to the draft horse. The zero pronoun is in reference to the ultimately the draft horse. We can easily make the zero pronoun explicit by inserting one‚ “Draft horse is one you get on tap instead of [one] in a bottle.” There is no word that
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Do We Need The Draft? We are in a time of war‚ just as we have been several times over the short duration of being a great country. This time we are in the Middle east‚ specifically Iraq‚ where thousands of young men and women have died defending our beliefs as a nation and protecting the rights of others in a foreign land. But what will happen if the war continues for several more years and we begin losing more and more of our sisters‚ brothers‚ husbands‚ wives‚ mothers and fathers to death
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Women should be required into enlist in the selective service system. There are many reasons that would make this fair. The first reason is that they have the same rights as men do. Women are also able to actively participate in active duty in the military as of January 24‚ 2013. If women were required to enlist it would be fair to the men of the United States. Women have the same rights as men do. In the early 20th century women fought for the Nineteenth Amendment which allowed women to vote
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11/8/06 Rough "Draft" The constant threat of a military draft has been plaguing in the back of young peoples ’ minds since the terrorist attacks of 9-11. Now with the increased tension of North Korea‚ prolonged war in Iraq‚ and the all volunteer military struggling to make recruitment numbers‚ the draft seems almost inevitable. But is that a bad thing? In order to create equality in our military‚ save tax payers ’ money‚ and end the war in Iraq‚ I feel that a military draft may be necessary
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because of this issue the people of the United States should sign a petition and gain signatures‚ draft the petition‚ and then gather a sponsoring committee together. The law should be changed to make it legal for people 18 years and older to be able to buy and/or drink alcohol. This needs to be accomplished by changing the law through your state government. The first step in doing this would be to draft a petition stating the drinking age should be 18. Then it is necessary to obtain signatures on
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KENNETH BAHIZI Final Draft The author in‚ “Millennial’s: The New Greatest Generation” argues that though Millennial’s are the most narcissist generation we have seen‚ this is not uncommon but rather a coming to terms with the environment and technology to which they are exposed. The author in‚ “Millennial’s: The New Greatest Generation” argues that though Millennial’s are the most narcissist generation we have seen‚ this is not uncommon but rather a coming to terms with the environment and
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Thesis Draft Edelyn Feeds & Poultry Supply Point of Sale System Members: Rona Bernardo BSCS II Edison Castillo Jr. BSCS II Joy Anne Gabriel ACT II Jose Raul Sinaguinan BSCS II Chester Tolentino BSCS II Introduction Today‚ it is very important to be one step ahead‚ to be able to cope up with technology and its benefits. People use computers in a wide variety of ways. In business‚ computers track inventories with barcodes and scanners. Computers used to solve mathematical problems
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Minhui Li ENG151 Prof. David Essay#1 Final Draft The facts are always more than what we thought. According to " What We Really Miss about the 1950s" by Stephanie Coontz‚ she strongly stated that the 1950s is not quite good enough for people want to go back even though more people picked the 1950s as best decade beside other decades. People feel the 1950s is good because the finance and communications between families were best‚ then it was best decade for children to grow up. However‚
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Rough Draft Imagine if someone is pretending to be you‚ using your credit card to indulge themselves in items that they would never be able to afford. Credit card fraud is far too common today‚ losing a wallet can mean losing your identity. A credit card can be a positive or negative thing‚ depending whose hands it’s in. Credit card fraud is a problem‚ that I believe‚ I have found the solution to. Fraud is any negative type of deception or trickery. Credit card fraud is the problem of our generation
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