What is the editing stage? The editing stage is when you check your essay for mistakes and correct them. Editing Steps: Grammar and Spelling 1. Check your spelling. 2. Check your grammar. 3. Read your essay again. 4. Make sure each sentence has a subject. 5. Make sure your subjects and verbs agree with each other. 6. Check the verb tenses of each sentence. 7. Make sure that each sentence makes sense. Style and Organization 1. Make sure your essay has an introduction‚ supporting
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Parliament are responsible for holding the government accountable for their actions and decisions. The need for party cohesion began when servers like small parties merged together‚ in order to pass legislation they needed full party support. Party discipline arose as means to force cohesion in the early stages of a new party (Hazan 2003‚ 3). Party discipline is still used to present a united party image‚ as a result there is not a mechanism to hold government accountable. Accountability‚ in a general
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Operation Market Garden was associated operation during World War II that lasted from the 17th to the 25th in September‚ 1944. It was against the Netherlands and Germany‚ and at that point was the largest airborne operation put together. During the battle‚ more resistance was encountered than predicted‚ so the allies failed to accomplish the objectives in the operation to cross the Rhine river‚ until March 1945. Operation market garden started the night before the actual battle date‚ when 200 Lancasters
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comprehensive conclusion that summarizes the points made in the essay? Proofread your final paper carefully for spelling‚ punctuation‚ grammar‚ repetition‚ missing or duplicated words. Aim to have your final paper ready a day or two ahead of the deadline. This
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“Pro Life” people that believe that for example a fetus is a human and abortion should be considered murder vs. “Pro Choice” people that for example believe its up to them and no one else a subject that has been a sensitive moral issue for people through out the entire world. The issue we currently have in hand is should abortion be allowed or not and why or why not. This issue should be looked at very carefully because it does not just effect one person it affects other people’s lives as well.
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people living in the United States alone today. The dilemma being faced is the option of country life and city life and which is the healthier option. This situation is an issue because people that are living in the city think the city is a healthier and better lifestyle with all their health precautions and closer distance to work or shopping. However‚ people living in the country think their way of life is good for health reasons. A concept has to be proven because both ideas may be the same‚ or it
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Timeout in the Gardens Towers competing to reach the heavens‚ cars racing one another to pass the “finish line” or the stoplight‚ and people rushing along the sidewalks‚ battling with time to see which one is faster. Growing up in Makati‚ I’ve gotten used to seeing this kind of scene every day. Of course‚ this is more commonly seen in the Central Business District of Makati. Whenever I am in the CBD of Makati‚ I am always greeted by the smog coming from the ever-so-mighty buses that contend with
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Comparing Real Vs. Movie Commodus In the movie “Gladiator”‚ Emperor Commodus is portrayed as an unstable and neurotic sadist who killed his own father for the throne of the Roman Empire. Real history has no solid proof that Commodus‚ while unstable‚ killed his father Marcus Aurelius. He was actually made co-emperor at the age of 5 (Heritage). However‚ the sexual relations he had with his sibling is in fact true‚ but it was not with the sister Lucilla as shown in the movie‚ but rather with another
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High school vs College life Education is considered as one of the important element in life nowadays. A child’s education history starts as early as kindergarten period‚ up until high school. Enrolling oneself in college after graduating from high school is another option to gain higher education. High school and college are both educational grounds for a student to grow and enhance their lives with knowledge. The transition from high school to college can be exciting yet challenging. Both social
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The Talmud tells a midrash about what it was like for Adam and Eve during their first year out of the Garden of Eden. As the legend goes‚ just as soon as they began to get used to their lives‚ they noticed that the days were getting progressively shorter. Adam and Eve began to worry that darkness was swallowing the light‚ and that the earth would eventually return to its primordial state of chaos and disorder. As they sank more into a state of depression‚ Adam and Eve believed that darkness would
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