Title of Reviewed Essay: _____________________ Reviewer Name: __________________ Peer Critique The goal here is to help your classmates revise their writing. So be serious‚ detailed and thorough--but also constructive and respectful--in your criticisms as you can be. Use additional sheets as necessary. 1. Identify the author’s critical thesis or main idea. Is it clearly worded? Is it early in the paper? Does it guide the analysis throughout the paper? Suggest ways of revising to make it
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The artefact is the cover page of my professional portfolio. This is an evidence of my knowledge‚ value‚ dispositions and skills which I have acquired. I have displayed six artefacts where it achieved the twelve learning outcomes. I have described how I have met the learning outcomes to standard‚ competencies and to effective practice. This portfolio present a compelling evidence of my understanding of teaching and learning. It demonstrates my scholarship‚ creativity and commitment as a professional
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The Saphea or in other terms an elaborate inclinometer (astrolabe) was an historical instrument which had the function of determining the altitude of celestial bodies‚ navigation as well as the calculation and estimation of latitude. Why did you choose this particular item? The artefact was particularly chosen as it had the ability to be implemented in diverse areas and categories during that period of time. These categories include astronomy‚ astrology as well as navigating. Furthermore‚ Medieval
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How Gymnastics Influenced My Life In “Rebel Music”‚ Daniel Felsenfeld delves into the inspirations he has drawn from music in his childhood. He tells of the struggles he experienced and the lack of inspiration from mandatory piano lessons from Ms. Shimizu. Although he dazzled her every time‚ he never felt connected to the music. Felsenfeld reminisced‚ “I was experiencing a personal drought‚ an acrid lack of culture of all kinds‚ especially music” (Felsenfeld 624). After he heard Beethoven’s Ninth
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1. Introduction: * Attention Getter: Dr. Seuss once said‚ “The more that you read‚ the more things you will know. The more that you learn‚ the more places you’ll go.” * Reasons to Listen: Reading is everywhere. Whether it’s on a billboard‚ something you have to do for school‚ or even for a cooking recipe‚ we all do it every single day. * Thesis Statement: My kindle embodies what reading means to me. * Preview of Main Points: i. First‚ I will explain how my
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A cultural artifact is an item that can display crucial information about the society that made or used it. An item can qualify as a cultural artifact‚ if it portrays evidence of either political‚ social‚ or religious organization of the specific people or community that it belongs to (Yelnick‚ "Cultural Artifact"‚ 2015). In my case‚ the cultural artifact chosen to display the western society is That 70’s Show. That ‘70’s Show was a comedy about a group of teen-aged friends living in Point Place
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Joann Harris Professor Morales Sociology 101 10 July 2010 Cultural Artifact Essay Cultural Artifacts are found all over from generation to generation. The cultural artifact that has stood out in my life is the Holy Bible. The Bible has been a cultural artifact in my family since before I was born. My choice of the Bible is because of how I was raised and what I was taught while I was growing up‚ and it was to live my life according to the words of the bible. It has taught me to have
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because sometimes I cannot get all of the information from just a picture. For this project‚ I showed in pictures and in words what I was trying to express in my paper. I did my remix project on my second paper‚ which was the cultural artifact. My cultural artifact was the evil eye. I was looking through a magazine‚ while I was thinking about this project and I saw an evil eye in the magazine. It clicked I was like I have to write about the evil eye. So I thought about it as to how I should remix
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Is it Language? In artifact number four my group was presented an image of “asemic art”. The image shows several variations of strokes. The image seems to be composed of circular or rounded strokes. There weren’t any strokes that seemed particularly sharp. In this image; there seems to be an element of creativity‚ which is a characteristic of language. I consider artifact four as a language because it’s creative‚ complex and redundant. However‚ there are some that would disagree because the writing
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organized cities through grid plans‚ and strong roman structures from roman concrete‚ are three artifacts that are some of the most historically significant developments in the civilization of ancient Rome. Roman Numerals‚ symbols that represent numbers‚ originated around 8th century B.C. to 2nd Century AD‚ to help record numbers in coins‚ art and stones. They are one of the most significantly important artifacts not only for Rome but the world as well. Leading to development and advancement in mathematics
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