(HS)2 and the impact it has had on me Cianne‚ here are my edits. I went through each paragraph mainly because your essay is too long. Don’t think it’s because its not a good essay! I think you have some really great points in this essay and I like the topic. You just need to work through it to decide what you find to be most important. Things to remember while editing: Show don’t tell and this essay is about YOU and not just the program or what Colorado has to offer. Great work so far. Keep editing
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missionaries to succeed. While serving my mission I learned how to relate with people and turn complete strangers in to life-long friends. Aside from the temporal benefits‚ I matured spiritually in ways that I couldn’t have anywhere else. Serving a full-time mission has taught me what it means to love and serve with no thought of reward. Completing a mission is definitely my most significant achievement to date. Learning/Teaching guitar When I was 12 years old I picked up my first guitar and started learning
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Who Is Most To Blame For Macbeth’s Downfall? I have chosen to write my essay about the cause of Macbeth’s downfall. I believe Macbeth had an immense build up of hatred inside him waiting to be released. I will discuss the possible factors that could have placed the final straw on the camel’s back and lead to the releasing of brave soldier Macbeth’s bloodthirst‚ and why he committed the acts he did. The first suspects are the witches. After all it was their voices that implanted the
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Most Embarrassing Moment I was in 5th grade at Quail Valley Elementary (QVE). Our class was writing reports on animals. I was a stutterer‚ and had been since I was 3 or 4 years old. I had picked "Sharks" to report on. I knew I would have to read my paper aloud to the class when I turned the paper in to my teacher‚ Ms. R. Knowing that‚ I tried to make my paper as short as possible. Ms. R was a new teacher at QVE. Our principal was disabled‚ and couldn’t walk‚ but she had no problem getting to each
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Can I ask you something? Have you ever been influenced by some important person that helped you become of what you are today? If you will be going to asked me? Yes! I have been. My family.I could begin the book pf my life with a picture of my parents. They are important because of the gift of life they gave to me. All that I needed to grow up in the moment I was born‚ they gave me everything‚ great love‚ care‚ understanding and so much patience. And now I will show you our family picture. I am the
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Once I was training in my boxing gym and I was lifting 18kg weights. The other weights were set out on the floor for when I needed them. I was on my last set of ten when I fell back and the weight came crashing down and landed on my leg. I couldn’t feel my left leg. I twisted my ankle and then I was rolling around in excrushiating pain. My manager came in once he heard my call of pain. He sat me up and I hobuld over to the ring. He sat me down on the side of the ring and got me a glass of warter. Ten
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but is that always true? My answer is a big no; I think there are some intangible gifts which show you how to live a better life. I usually get gifts from my friends and relative on different occasions‚ but the gift which I received from my mother‚ to respect and care for others‚ was the best gift ever. My mom has numerous good qualities. She is a very loving and kind person. She is a very hard worker and dedicated towards her work. Everyone who knows my mom likes her a lot because
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My personal beliefs influenced by my spiritual beliefs are fundamental to my human existence. My traditional African background that promotes collectivism‚ communal wellbeing‚ rather than the individualism of emphasis on self-has been critical in my spiritual growth. My early childhood was lived in Nigeria Africa. The influence of my devotion to Christianity in the Catholic Church influenced my personal and spiritual development. The Church undertook several welfare programs including free education
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My most prized possession- My initial thought was how could i possibly narrow that down to just one single item? After fifteen minutes of staring at a blank piece of paper trying to figure out what exactly i cherish most in my life‚ it hit me. The one thing in my life that plays the biggest and most important role in my everyday story is my health. When people hear the word possession they automatically think of an object belonging to one. However‚ it is often forgotten that a possession isn’t always
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MAY THEIN KYAW ENGL 0310 February 2 ‚ 2014 My Most Memorable Trip My country is Myanmar. It is one of the countries is South-East Asia. It is important neighboring countries are China‚ India‚ Laos‚ and Thailand. There are many interesting and beautiful places all over the world. I had a most memorable trip in two years ago. I went to a range of hills known as Kayik –Ti-Yo‚ the ancient city of Bagan and Pyin Oo Lwin. First of all‚ we had t scramble up hill and
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