to watch our for: -sentence fragments -run-on sentences -unnecessary shifts in tense Sentence Fragments Avoid using sentence fragments: -A word or a group of words that does not contain a subject and a verb or does not express complete thought Example: -Incorrect: Nina Otero was on of the first Mexican American women. To hold a major public post in New Mexico. Run-On Sentences Avoid using a run-on sentence: -Two or more complete thoughts that run together as if they were one complete thought
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Irene’s Diary Entry Dear Diary 12/05/2068 These past couple of weeks at Gattaca have been pretty intense with the Murder of the director and the FBI searching the place and testing all employees for some kind of result. They found an eyelash in the south wing which gave them a suspect by the name of Vincent Freeman‚ whom is an in-valid‚ they say he used
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were to proofread this passage‚ what grammatical errors would you mark? Is the punctuation correct? Are proper nouns capitalized? Are there any incomplete or run-on sentences? How does this affect your ability to read the passage? Today‚ we’re going to take a look at some basic grammar rules‚ including capitalization‚ fragments‚ and run-on sentences. Today’s lesson objective is: Students will demonstrate a grade-appropriate command of the conventions of Standard English grammar. Learning Skills
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Hunter Tipton Mr. Aaron Gottbrath English IV Final Paper May 1‚ 2012 The BBCOR Standard There are mixed reactions to the acronym BBCOR in the baseball community. If someone would be to ask a pitcher what they thought about the BBCOR bats‚ many would say that they love the new bats. If someone were to ask someone that is a batter‚ they more than likely would say that they don’t like the new bats. There are those that look strictly on the statistics and say that the new bats are great because
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Target Audience The target audience for Chicken Run is family viewing as it is model animation and is simply for younger viewing and it also has adult humour so everyone in the family can enjoy it. Type of Animation Chicken Run is a film made using characters and models out of plastercine and clay etc. so it is a model animation. Camera Movement Throughout Chicken run there is a wide variety of camera angles used‚ each specially selected to give a certain view or impression
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world. Walt Disney was born in Chicago‚ Illinois. Mark McGwire - For his career‚ McGwire averaged a home run once every 10.61 at bats‚ the lowest at bats per home run ratio in baseball history. In 1987‚ he broke the single-season home run record for rookies‚ with 49. In 1998‚ McGwire achieved national fame for their home run-hitting prowess in pursuit of Roger Maris’ single season home run record; McGwire
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veterans such as Chris Volstad‚ most well known for being on the Marlins 2003 World Series team. One of the major things the Braves need to hope for is the starters Earned Run Average‚ which last year was not very good across the board. The lowest qualified was Teheran. While the rest of the staff was almost one and half runs above Teheran. If the Braves can figure out the pitching woes and not have any serious injuries‚ I can see the team making improvements but not a first to last team like they
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your mistakes and continue on the next journey a little wiser. One person I believe that shares my law of life is Mark McGwire. He didn’t get caught up in the home-run chase in the 1998 season‚ but instead played every game in the best way he could. And‚ most of the time‚ he helped his team. He didn’t just go out there and hit home runs because he wanted to be ahead in the end‚ but because he wanted to make it a good season for his teammates and him. I also think the 1999-2000 St. Louis Rams as
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It’s obvious that the Federal Express Corporation has been in a suffering situation.In a month‚ the company continually lost two key managers‚ especially considering the difficult stage it was at . We believe that it is hightime for the company to reconsider its HRP. Firstly‚ there are several main reasons for the key figures choosing resignation. For Oliver‚ lacking of clear career path or opportunity to promote‚ he had chosen to be a president and CEO of another company. For Ms Presley‚ due
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inputs. Fixed and variable inputs are defined in both economic sense and technical sense. In economic sense‚ a fixed input is one whose supply is inelastic in the short run. In technical sense‚ a fixed input is one that remains fixed (or constant) for certain level of output. A variable input is one whose supply in the short run is elastic‚ example‚ labour‚ raw materials‚ and the like. Users of such inputs can
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