Thank you for choosing SMARTHINKING’s OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi‚ Gregory! I am Kobe F.‚ and I am happy to read and comment on your work today. I like your choice of Jimmy Cross for your discussion because he suffers the most important conflict between desire and duty in O’Brien’s story. Below I suggest some improvements to your thesis statement‚ conclusion‚ and comma use to help you enhance your paper. The ERF and embedded comments include the draft being on topic and grammatically
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Abdulaziz Alshehri 31 October 2012 Cinderella Story Cinderella is a wonderful Disney movie. The social injustice in Cinderella is how they treat her. The ugly stepsisters and the evil stepmother treat Cinderella like she is trash. They have no respect for her. In one scene they destroy a dress that she is wearing. Cinderella was enjoying a leisurely life with her parents. Likely‚ Cinderella is blessed with love and compassionate from her mother‚ also from her father. It was her parents who made
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Ridwaan Khan Good Day Story 1 The sun was casting a dying red light over the court yard‚ as the shadows partly eclipsed the sun. The view from the enclosed cell chamber was tormenting him as it cruelly made him reminisce about that one‚ painful time he was forced to remember eternally. The walls beyond the prison gates showed stretches of dry barren land with blistering weather all year round. The barren empty earth extended far into the horizon. His head hung dejectedly‚ he closed his eyes
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In the Ted Talk “Less stuff‚ more happiness” by Graham Hill he shares stories about how he downsized his life and how happy he is because of it. Graham starts of the talk with a really good ethos by revealing the fact that American homes today have three times more space than they did 50 years ago‚ explaining how our space has been expanding over time and how our belongings have accumulated with it. In attempt to capture the attention of the audience and show credibility. Correspondingly Graham
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Jeannette the protagonist of the memoir The Glass Castle is a glorious character. Jeannette is most given intelligent‚ responsible‚ and an independent character. Jeannette is the most intelligent person in the book because she made her own braces out of coat hangers and rubber. She’s also really flaunted her ability to be responsible. Rose Mary made Jeannette take care of Maureen her younger sister. Lastly Jeannette is independent from her family because she moved to New York City for college and
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Patience Jones November 12‚ 2012 Short Story Corrections Everything Matters Everything Matters “Shay! How are you?” asked Leah. Leah and Shay were cousins‚ but they acted like sisters. Shay and Leah lived together and were both in college. Shay had just gotten back from a vacation in Cuba. Shay hugged Leah and said‚ “I’m doing okay. I feel a little down lately.” Shay frowned. “Well‚ how was your trip?” asked Leah. Shay just shrugged and waved her off then went into the house. Later
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Book Review: William R. Estep‚ The Anabaptist Story‚ second edition. Grand Rapids‚ Michigan: William B. Eerdmans Publishing Company‚ 1975. 250 pages. Paper‚ $10.95. First edition published in 1963 by Broadman Press‚ Nashville‚ Tennessee. William Estep‚ Professor of Church History at Southwestern Baptist Theological Seminary (Ft. Worth‚ Texas)‚ summarizes the work of early Anabaptist leaders and their teachings. He surveys a vast array of material‚ giving short biographies of more than a dozen leaders
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The Untold Story of Racism My friend Rhonda is an African American female living in New York‚ who has a masters degree in accounting‚ in addition to a law degree. One day‚ as she was surfing through the internet looking for jobs‚ she came across a law firm that had a single job position open for a lawyer specializing in financial cases. This job intended to promote an existing employee. Rhonda decided to apply for that job. The following day she was called for an interview. On the interview day
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2045 The Danger of a Single Story and the Application of Ethical Theories In 2009 the Nigerian writer Chimamanda Adichie gave a fabulous TED talk called “The Danger of a Single Story.” It was about what happens when complex human beings and situations are reduced to a single narrative: when Africans‚ for example‚ are treated as pitiable poor‚ starving victims with flies on their faces. Her point was that each individual life contains a heterogeneous compilation of stories. If you reduce people to one
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UNIVERSITY OF ABUJA TERM PAPER ASSIGNMENT NAME OSENI FUNMILAYO MATRIC NO. 06221067 DEPARTMENT ENGLISH AND LITERARY STUDIES COURSE CODE ENL407 COURSE TITLE THE SHORT STORY QUESTION ‘The short story lacks criticism and lacks form’. Justify this statement using any three stories from THE JAMBULA TREE AND OTHER STORIES. The short was said to lack both criticism and form. These are some of the many false accusations that were levelled against the short story. These allegations‚ coupled with several others
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