Material Appendix F Outline and Thesis Statement Guide (Apple) Mac vs. (Microsoft) Windows PC Although Windows is a household name‚ Apple is fast becoming the company that technology users look to. This thesis will be discussing the pros and the better quality of the Apple Mac OS X as opposed to the Windows PC. An Apple Mac is virtually better that a Windows PC because of its securer platform‚ enhanced audio features and its excellent reputation. I. (Apple) Mac has an excellent security
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the best decision my mom has made in my life. Before I came to Glenwood I lived in the dangerous part of the south side of Chicago. My family and I lived in a two bedroom apartment. I went to a public school right down the street but never experienced the ability to walk from home to school. My mom always made sure I was escorted or drove up to school when she was away at work. Reason for that was because she feared the danger of me being in the wrong place at the wrong time like many other young
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Examples Of Improving Thesis Statements · The War of 1812 came before the American Civil War. (Bad example) · The War of 1812 set into motion the main events that caused the American Civil War. (Good example) · The judicial system needs to have power over Congress in order to do its job. (Bad example) · In order for the judicial system to judge whether a law is constitutional‚ it must have the power to overturn a temporary law of Congress. (Good example) · People need to stay healthy for
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Negro for days‚ weeks‚ or permanently‚ the racism and discrimination is stained to their soul like the stain. It can be scrubbed away and rinsed off‚ but a little bit of it will always be there‚ until their freedom is established. The life of a Negro in 1959‚ was rough and full of despair and many couldn’t understand it; John Howard Griffin had trouble living it for weeks at a time. Arguably‚ I can state that I do not believe that the critique is accurate or ever will be‚ because of the racial remarks
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Thesis Statement: In this research paper‚ six points about teens and driving include I the laws‚ II cell phones‚ III parents‚ IV facts‚ V physical and demands‚ and VI statistics. First‚ if a teenager wants a driver’s license‚ they need to know the laws. The first step is to fill out a license application with your firs‚ last name‚ and date. The laws says non-citizens cannot (“Obtaining a Learner’s Permit” 1). The article states‚ “With the passage of SB 226 (Joshua’s law) by the 2005 Georgia general
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Thesis Statement: Saddam Hussein’s actions and brutality towards the Iraqi people prompted the U.S. and other forces to invade Iraq. Body Saddam Hussein’s early life affected his life as a political leader and president. Saddam was born in poverty in a mud hut (9) His full name was Saddam Hussein Abd al-Majid al-Tikriti (5) Before he was born his father left their family and his brother died from cancer (5) His stepfather made his life hard but then Saddam ran away to his uncle (4) Saddam Hussein’s
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October 17‚ 2010 Bowling for Columbine Thesis Statements 1) The high casualties caused by guns are a result of how easy it is to obtain one. If policies were made stricter‚ casualties would go down. I do not agree with this because it would only affect the people who go to obtain their guns legally. If you really wanted one all you would have to do is steal it‚ so the policies would then have no effect on you. 2) Minorities and blacks are made to be scarier than they are because they
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which a human being can indulge. It brings out all that is best; it removes all that is base. All men are afraid of battle. The coward is the one who lets his fear overcome his sense of duty. Duty is the essence of manhood.-George S. Patton. Thesis Statement: The Battle of Hastings was a deadly and horrible battle in England with William the Conqueror not liking the king’s rules and that’s how the Battle of Hastings all happened. Before the Battle William spent most of 1067 in Normandy‚ returning
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Thesis Statement: War can have an adverse affect on children and adults. Although there are little positive affects of war there are vastly negative affects in mental and physical health. The main topics that come to mind when thinking about the adverse affects on children during war are their lack of education‚ the traumatic scars left behind‚ and the death of loved ones. One of the affects of war for children is their education‚ during war there is no time to go to school. Getting your education
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class very small bit about media Paragraph 3: Media shows inequality through images Conclusion: Discussion of old regime‚ high cost of living‚ taxes‚ media. My Thesis: The media brought to light the burden of the heavy taxes and debt which lead to an economic crisis and triggered the revolution. Actual Thesis: “Media was used to convey ideas of unfairness between the estates during a stage of the Revolution. There were several causes of the revolution‚ from high bread prices to
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