you revise specifically? - How did these specific revisions make the end product better? - If you chose to ignore some feedback‚ why did you do so? After meeting with Mrs. Johnson‚ I had to review over the suggestions and reflect about the feedback I received. For the most part‚ I followed the suggestions. The things that I revised specifically was simple grammar errors and showing progression of the characters and conflict‚ which needed to connect to the thesis statement. In the case of the simple
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“How does Fitzgerald tell the story in chapter 1 of ‘The Great Gatsby’?” Fitzgerald opens the first chapter introducing us to Nick Carroway‚ who is clearly of first person narration and he is telling the story from the future. By telling the story as though it has already occurred‚ Fitzgerald has created the illusion that his main character has already experienced the events that are unfolding. This ensures that Nick is a retrospective narrator throughout the book but also obviously a bias story
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First this information describes how red light cameras have decreased accidents. The use of red light cameras has decreased right-angle side impact accidents but‚ in turn‚ has caused rear-end collisions to increase. If the goal is to reduce all intersection crashes and possibly be a
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GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Bobby Watson GEN/200 1/26/2012 Jackie Novak GEN/200 Thesis Statement and Informal Outline Worksheet Achieving Collegiate Success through Personal Responsibility I. Achieving collegiate success through personal responsibility is your responsibility. My thesis statement is: Even though collegiate success is directly proportional to effort applied‚ we must develop a true sense of purpose and responsibility because individuals
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How does Ian McEwan tell the story in Chapter 9? Ian McEwan uses a variety of techniques in order to tell the story throughout the novel ‘Enduring Love’. Looking at Chapter 9 in close detail I am going to analyse the ways in which McEwan tells the story with the use of form‚ structure and language. The majority of the novel is told in the first person however chapter 9 has a third person narrative and is in the present tense. McEwan uses Joe’s narratives in order to explain Clarissa’s perspective
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Barefoot A True Story It was a beautiful‚ sunny day out‚ and I woke up only to figure out I had to clean. My chores were assigned and I got stuck with the bathroom‚ mopping‚ and dishes. Our cousins whom I adore were coming to visit us from Arkansas. Although I didn’t know it at the time. We see them once a year at Thanksgiving‚ so this was a big deal. Our parents told us some of our friends from where we use to live were coming to visit us. I finished my bedroom which only needed to be tidied up
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As I walked my fingers across the brown flimsy opening of the cardboard box my other hand reached for my tattered old teddy‚ I’d had him ever since I can remember – he was a gift from my aunt Elizabeth. While my hands were holding the bear a tidal wave of memories came rushing back into my mind of the moments that him and I shared‚ alas they are now just memories. I don’t recall why but ive always known my tattered teddy as peter‚ I guess I just thought he looked like a peter. His fur used to be
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“My Father Writes His Story” In this essay I will discuss personal stories from my childhood that will outline similarities and differences of “Western” and “Eastern” cultures. “Western” and “Eastern” countries differ in many ways. They both have their own history‚ culture and traditions. They also differ by how “Western” and “Eastern” people present themselves and tell stories about themselves. In both “Western” and “Eastern” culture heritage‚ family‚ respect and honesty play major factors. Me
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English reflection statement – Representations of War My PowerPoint collage is about my understanding of how war is represented. It explores the idea of how I believe that war is a negative connotation in society. Throughout my PowerPoint I have used images that relate well to the 3 pieces of texts that I decided to represent; The Send Off‚ The Charge of the Light Brigade and Saving Private Ryan. In my first slide I designed a title page stating the title of my PowerPoint and wrote my name
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GCSE Media Assignment- Titanic How has James Cameron presented and adapted the true story of the Titanic? In the 1997 the blockbuster movie Titanic’ directed by James Cameron the story is told of the R.M.S Titanic’s ill-fated maiden voyage on which over 1500 men‚ women and children tragically lost their lives in the icy waters of the Atlantic Ocean The director’s presentation of the true facts from the Titanic disaster are impeccable. This was achieved by building a 2/3rds size model of
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