The quality of the thesis statement is outstanding as it is a complete sentence and makes a point without moving into the first person like I feel‚ In my opinion‚ and the rest. Furthermore‚ it conveys the topic clearly where the reader gets significant information about what ought to be discussed throughout the paper. Nevertheless‚ the thesis statement needs to outline something interesting that will make the reader salivate and have the urge to continue reading. That is‚ it needs to hold the attention
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Matching the Words The exchange of ideas‚ opinions and knowledge counts a lot in college‚ especially when students get stuck on the very first thesis statement of their very first research paper. Many of them get frustrated -- their thoughts seem locked like money in a vault. Interaction and peer collaboration are the only ways to unlock the unconscious ideas that dwell in our brains. ACMT was not the first place where I encountered the importance of cooperation and variety of cultures. I
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and conflict‚ which needed to connect to the thesis statement. In the case of the simple grammar errors‚ there was part of a sentence that did not make sense‚ “...how any individual would be lost‚ attempting to discover their own sense of happiness.” This part of the sentence did not make
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LIT 100 Milestone One: Thesis Statement Worksheet 1. Use the following guiding questions to help you develop a thesis statement for an essay based on a story that you can relate to: a. So far in this course‚ what reading have you connected with the most (provide the title only)? Barbie Doll b. Think about the author’s overall intended message or begin to draw connections between the author’s time period‚ culture‚ etc.‚ and the text. I believe the author was trying to show how something like a
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WRITING A THESIS STATEMENT: FIVE QUESTIONS Question Answer 1. What is the general topic? Sports. 2. What is my limited topic? The benefits of tennis. 3.What is my opinion about the Playing tennis is a sport I enjoy limited topic? because of its benefits. 4. What is my purpose in writing I will tell readers what the benefits about this topic? of playing tennis are so that they will have
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species has been insufficient. Species decline is directly correlated to human causes‚ whether in agriculture causing loss of habitat‚ or by the greenhouse effect causing global warming. When a habitat becomes deconstructed‚ the organisms‚ plants‚ and animals that once occupied the area have to reduce their carrying capacity‚ making extinction more probable. Human activities have drastically changed natural greenhouses over the past centuries. This includes burning fossil fuels such as coal or oil which
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INTRODUCTION I. Attention Material A. The true value of education 1. Can it be fought for? 2. Can we put a price on institutionalized education? 3. What defines a fundamental right? B. San Antonio v. Rodriguez 1. Transition into thesis statement 2. Insert thesis statement (Transition: Provide background of Rodriguez case) BODY I. Background
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Animals are sometimes housed in zoos for beneficial reasons such as educational purposes‚ providing habitat for animals unable to survive in the wild‚ and research purposes. A significant amount of research is conducted on factors that might be stressful to wildlife to improve the welfare and well-being of captive animals; however‚ an equal amount of research is not being performed on each stress factor that could affect captive wildlife. Despite zoo animals being put on display and constantly exposed
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scholars is that the health of zoo animals in Britain needs specific attention as a way to counter the increasing push for the banning of zoos. Most scholars tend to specifically address the causes of low health of zoo animals. The most common causes addressed are visitor interactions‚ types of enclosures‚ and a lack of opportunities for wild behavior. There are scholars such as G.R. Hosey and Gareth Davey who both feel that zoo visitors have a strong impact on animals’ health. Davey argues that visitors
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ARE ZOOS CRUEL OR EDUCATIONAL Zoos are cruel because of recent incidents that have happened creating the deaths and injuries of some animals. In the 2005 DreamWorks move‚ Madagascar‚ a group of zoo animals wanted to leave the zoo for a day to explore New York little did they know there one day escape turned into an adventure greater than they could have every imagine. While exploring New York they were accidentally shipped to the island of Madagascar. Though they were among other animals that
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