Ms. Leathers‚ I had changed my thesis statement‚ but i did not know how to re-submit it to you. My new thesis statement is “The epic known as Beowulf‚ which had originally started as a traditional folk story‚ showed strong hero characteristics in the hero Beowulf.” In the Anglo-Saxon days‚ there was one story that showed the true meaning of being a hero. The epic known as Beowulf‚ which had originally started as a traditional folk story‚ showed strong hero characteristics in the hero Beowulf
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Topic: People choose Abortion over an Adoption Thesis statement: Terminating a pregnancy gives no future to a child. At least with an adoption‚ the child will have a life. Brown‚ Kristi Burton. Adoption: Why So Many Choose the First and What We Can Do. Live Action News. www.livenews.com.15 May. 2012. Apr. 2018 http://www.lifenews.com/2012/05/17/why-do-more-people-choose-abortion-over-adoption. Do mothers considering abortion realize that families go on waiting lists to adopt newborn babies?
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original essay‚ and the feedback that was given. After looking and reviewing all this information‚ I looked at the weakness in the essay. I started with the thesis statement. Even though the points of the thesis stayed the same‚ I tried to make it more argumentative. Therefore‚ I changed the wording and choice of words used. After focusing on the thesis‚ I then looked at the introduction. I copied my
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I. Introduction A. Finding childcare can be hard and you may find yourself wondering how can childcare benefit your child. B. Thesis statement: Finding child care is important to me because childcare helps with language and social development‚ prepares children for future schooling‚ and is workforce support for parents. II. Body My first reason: Childcare helps with language and social development 1.More possibilities to connect with other children equals more chances to learn how to socialize
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Sinners in the Hands of an Angry God. Thesis Statement is: The thesis of Jonathan Edwards sermon tells as that those who have not accepted Jesus Christ as their Lord and personal savior are on the track which leads to hell. Edwards cites evidence that God at any point in time could throw those who have not gone through a religious changing situation or experienced an inward renewal down to hell. This being said leaves mankind helpless or with very little option‚ so we should yearn for him‚ get closer
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Outline Thesis Statement: Tipping should be expected when it comes to paying the bill at a restaurant‚ or bar because the server has to wait and be patient with unpleasant customers‚ they receive little pay‚ and they do their best to make customers’ dining experiences peaceful and enjoyable. Body Paragraph 1: Topic Sentence- Dealing with unhappy customers can be very stressful to a person‚ but imagine having to constantly try and be patient with the person who keeps complaining about every little
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The thesis statement of the essay "The Clinic" is the last sentence of the second paragraph when the author writes‚"It gave the impression of more than the typical stomachache‚ and I plied ahead‚ waiting to finally ask the key question that slipped the knot on this mystery and sent the bacteria or virus or swallowed garden flower culprit plummeting into my lap." This statement demonstrates that the author is only troubled by the patient’s medical history instead of the most important information
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avoided. Fluoride has hidden dangers that not enough people know about and should be removed from water supplies despite false reports that it is actually beneficial‚ and the practice of water fluoridation should be completely eliminated. (Thesis Statement) Fluoride is an endocrine disruptor that can affect your bones‚ brain‚ thyroid gland‚ pineal gland and even your blood sugar levels. (Preview of Main Points) In order to explain to you the dangers of fluoride‚ I will focus
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DATA ANALYTICS USING HADOOP AND ITS FUNTIONALITIES Thesis statement: In the modern world‚ the delivery of treatment models is rapidly changing and many decisions are made behind these changes are driven by using data. In today’s world‚ it is becoming much important to understand as much as possible about the patient by picking up the warning signs of illness at early stage of treatment than later stage. So‚ Big data and Hadoop in healthcare sector are being used to predict occurrence of diseases
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TESOL Thesis Statement TESOL ESL THESIS TOPIC China has arisen in all perspectives of the twenty-first century. Parents in China play crucial roles of children learning and they are now more concern about the English ability their children have enhanced which means teacher must pay greater attention to the communication between parents and teacher and the challenge it brings. Thesis Closed policy The closed policy has created difficulties‚ for Chinese students in methods of learning
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