Examples Of Improving Thesis Statements · The War of 1812 came before the American Civil War. (Bad example) · The War of 1812 set into motion the main events that caused the American Civil War. (Good example) · The judicial system needs to have power over Congress in order to do its job. (Bad example) · In order for the judicial system to judge whether a law is constitutional‚ it must have the power to overturn a temporary law of Congress. (Good example) · People need to stay healthy for
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It seems logical that good education can only be acquired if one have enough money to spend because all supporting factors require funds and other resources to be realized‚ so much so in a developing country as the Philippines. One of the most evident problems is the poor having less access to good education. Good education require both the hardware (school buildings‚ books‚ supplies‚ equipment) and software (trained and dedicated teachers‚ healthy citizens) components that require funds from both
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University of Phoenix Material Thesis Statement and Outline What is your thesis statement? Hate Crimes have been around for years‚ and with the recent rise in them much can be done to reduce this type of crime. I. Introduction …. Hate Crimes are offenses like murder‚ robbery‚ or vandalism with the intent of discriminating against someone. These crimes are normally violent and intended to discriminate against someone else because of their race‚ color‚ or gender and more commonly now‚ their social
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Definition of Key Terms: Mobile Platform - also described as an OS or operating system. Mobile Device - a small computing device‚ typically small enough to be handheld (and hence also commonly known as a handheld computer or simply handheld) having a display screen with touch input and/or a miniature keyboard. Mobile Application - a computer program designed to run on mobile devices such as smartphones and tablet computers. Android - a software package for smartphones‚ including many application
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Thesis Statement In most jurisdictions the initial report of rape is made to the police. The law generally requires that reports of rape be investigated; the old idea that only rapes immediately reported be investigated has been abandoned. Law enforcement officers are often trained on appropriate procedures for handling reports of rape but the extent and intensity of training varies considerably. Finally reports of rape can be made by others than the victim including social workers‚ doctors or school
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What is Thesis Statement? Thesis statement is a statement that conveys the ultimate message‚ intention or the main argument of your essay. In other words‚ thesis statement can summarize your whole essay within a single sentence. Your thesis statement will be enough for the examiners about which side or position you are taking in the discussion or debate. For example‚ in the question of “do you agree?” type‚ this statement will tell the reader whether you agree and to what extent. There are chaos
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How Do I Write a Thesis Statement? What is a thesis statement? A thesis statement is a very specific argument that guides your paper. Generally‚ a thesis statement consists of two parts: 1. a clearly identifiable topic or subject matter‚ and 2. a succinct summary of what you have to say about that topic A thesis functions like the case a lawyer has to make to the judge and jury in a courtroom. An effective thesis statement explains to your reader the case you are going to make and how you are going to make it
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Gun violence in America Gun violence in America is not at all as bad as it is in Sierra Leone and other countries with war and little law enforcement as we read about in the book a long way gone. In the book the main character Ishmael discovers that America is not at all like he heard through rap songs. When he moves to America and tells his story of being a soldier and killing people the people he talks to about it think that it is cool and Ishmael states in the book “violence in America is romanticized
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Good and Weak Thesis Statements There is really no wrong way to write a thesis statement‚ you either have a good or a weak thesis. I am going to explain four weak thesis statements I was given‚ then tell you what was weak about them and how to make it better. A weak thesis fails to take a stand and not be specific towards the topic. Just making an observation or an overly broad claim will not work. A good thesis is ideas that answers a question‚ it usually starts with an observation that is something
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Thesis statements and topic sentences help organize the ideas in an essay. Academic writers are expected to use thesis statements and topic sentences. Academic essays are often organized using the following pattern: Introduction—the first paragraph of the essay. The thesis statement is usually the last sentence of the introductory paragraph. Body paragraphs—the paragraphs. Each of these body paragraphs usually begins with a topic sentence. Last paragraph—Called the conclusion or concluding
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