mistakes in my literary analysis was the thesis statement. Although it may have lead smoothly into my paper‚ it was way too broad and would not give the reader a clear idea as to where my paper was leading. Furthermore‚ the only sentence that I had written in my opening paragraph that mentioned the theme of 1984 was “1984 is full of many symbols‚ motifs‚ and themes that have formed a very eye opening and timeless story.” This sentence was originally my thesis. Not only does it mention too many other
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Clarification Division Essay A classification-division essay presents an analysis by separating items: if you are classifying‚ you are placing different items into a set of categories. Each member of each category must be logically related. For example‚ you can classify people by age category: child‚ teen‚ and adult. If you are dividing‚ you are taking a single item and breaking it down into its smaller parts. Each part must represent a logical division of the larger unit. For example‚ you can
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asked to do this quite a bit in your history and civics classes as well. In most cases‚ you were taught to come up with a point that you intend to make‚ and to put it into one sentence called the thesis statement. You would then come up with three more sentences that would support your thesis statement with three specific points. With these four ingredients‚ you wrote a straightforward five-paragraph essay‚ and hopefully got an A for your effort. Of course‚ for the purposes of writing an epinion
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Topic: Does the death penalty deter people from committing murder? Thesis Statement: I completely disagree that the death penalty deters people for committing murder. Search strategy and evaluation resources: The start of my research began by investigating the view points of those who believe the death penalty deter people from committing murder. I began with the Gale opposing viewpoints context in the ASA online database which are tools I used to explore current topics that include pro/con view
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Mode: Argumentative/Persuasive Thesis statement: There are three main factors that show why the U.S. should now leave Iraq. In fact‚ this war is costly both in terms of economic loss and human lives‚ and affects the world opinion about the U.S. Purpose: to persuade individuals that the U.S should leave Iraq Audience: Students Research Position paper Outlines
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Violence in schools has spread widely throughout the nation. However‚ there are many ways we can stop or prevent future violence in schools. Having security cameras in schools is a basic way that would help reduce problems in schools. In the past decades‚ almost three-fourths of the United States teens are afraid of violent crime among their peers. With all the people being injured or killed in school by guns and other weapons‚ School should have more metal detectors. Gun laws are still
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Gun Violence in The United States INTRODUCTION Since 1982‚ at least sixty-two mass shootings have occurred‚ thirty-two of them since 2006. (Aronsen). Jared Loughner was sentenced to life in prison after shooting nineteen people in January of 2011. Last July‚ fifty-eight people were shot and twelve killed while watching the new Batman movie in a theater in Colorado. In December‚ twenty-six people were murdered‚ including twenty first-graders‚ in a Connecticut elementary school (Follman). The issue
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To Kill a Mockingbird-ComparelContrast Outline Format Essay Sample Subject by Subject Thesis Statement: While both The Lord of the Rings books and movies have similar plots‚ significant changes in Aragorn‚ Gandalf and Gollum’s characters leave the viewers of the movie less emotionally involved than those who read the books. The Book Aragorn’s relationship to the female characters Gandalf’s powers and involvement in the story Gollum’s evil nature and effect on Frodo The Movie
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Essay Thesis Statement: Complete the following statement as it applies to your essay Romeo and Juliet are (more similar than different) which leads to…. (More different than similar) Body Paragraph #1: Romeo or Juliet Topic Sentence: (Romeo or Juliet) is what sort of person? What does this lead to? Connect to Thesis Statement. Character traits should have something in common—make sure you are showing what these character traits lead to (thesis). A. First
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Thesis Statement for Reflective Essays Should contain: 1. Event/ topic of focus 2. Event’s impact on you Example / A friend’s forgetfulness helped me see beyond my contempt of my great grandmother to contempt of myself for loving so conditionally. Are these thesis statements or not?? This past summer’s lesson was perhaps the most memorable one yet. Gazing from across the pasture to the creek‚ I realized that love is universal among earth’s creatures‚ that they all possess the
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