The peer review is over Alex Wittrock’s Draft 1.1 “Perspectives on Barefoot Running versus Shod Running”. The thesis statement is‚ “When looking at the overwhelming evidence for and against barefoot running‚ many of the experts would agree that running without shoes is beneficial for injury prevention‚ while other experts disagree and argue the risks are too great attempting to run without shoes.” The purpose in the first paragraph is clear in that the author explains as to why the ideas of whether
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Name: KEJIAN YANG Topic: Smoking Thesis Statement: If you quit smoking‚ you will live a healthy life. Type of Speech: Fact General Purpose: To inform Strategy for Presenting Content: Problem Solution Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience that breaking the habit of smoking is the right way to go because smoking is harmful to the individual personally as well as being harmful to others around you. Introduction: Did you know that smoking is the most preventable cause of disease and premature
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Black Friday a Persuasive Thesis Statement on Black Friday: Even though Some families like going shopping on Black Friday. Black Friday is bad because Black friday takes away family time on Thanksgiving. and Black Friday is dangerous because people get trampled and get in fights over stuff. Black Friday is dangerous because People get in fight. One time a someone got tasered by someone just to get something. Another reason is a crowed of people pushed open the doors and trampled a
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Thesis Statement: Neal Dow generated a movement against alcohol known the Temperance Movement. He was a man with a lot of perseverance who never gave up to reach his goal. During the 19th century in Maine and other states liquor was a major problem that a lot of people didn’t actually notice. Mainly because water was often contaminated which made alcohol much safer to drink‚ and it wasn’t expensive than milk and water. Neal Dow a politician born in Portland‚ Maine on March 20‚1804. Always saw
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Puritans essay‚ Austin Frost FCA’s: Thesis Statement /10 One quote from EACH sermon for support /20 No more than four capitalization errors /10 Puritans‚ Protestant members who aroused from the church in England in the 16th century‚ are viewed skeptically for their beliefs in life. While being guided by their Holy Bibles sermons‚ and only Lord and Savior‚ quoted material made by their references became controversial for being entirely careless or selfish against all who opposed the Protestant
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Topic: Safe Sex Thesis Statement: (Proposition) The greatest kind of sex is safe sex. Type of Speech: Proposition of Value Listener Needs: Safety needs. Strategy for Presenting Content: Problem Solution Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience to be smart when it comes to sex. Introduction: Do you honestly believe that everyone around you is practicing safe sex? According to a sex survey taken by the leading condom brand‚ Durex‚ in 2005‚ 51% of adults in America have had unprotected
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Ashley Teschendorf English IV Mrs.Bee Outline Thesis Statement: The birth of every child is a complex process. Neonatal nurses have been around for decades to be by a patient’s side during the birth of a newborn child. Neonatal nurses take care of premature babies during the duration of their stay at a hospital. Neonatal nurses can also be categorized as neonatal or pediatric nurses depending on the age group they serve. I: History A: Kennedys baby Patrick’s death. B: How it
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It happens when the bones of the spine (vertebrae) don’t type properly around a part of the baby’s spinal wire. It will have an effect on how the skin on the rear appearance. And in severe cases‚ it will create walking or daily activities. Thesis Statement Spina Bifida happens
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by selling children as food for rich gentlemen and ladies. By doing this he mocks the authority of the British officials. Swift formats his piece with heavy satire requiring the reader to dig for the complete idea of the piece. Yet the thesis statements in the opening ‚with it being the “modest proposal”. The parallelism in this piece is few .The author ‚in my opinion ‚ used too much irony and satire ‚so much that it made it difficult for me to read. In the piece Swift uses a lot of irony
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Thesis Statement: Yellow Fever is a potentially dangerous virus but by following the right steps it can be prevented and hopefully eliminated. I. Overview of disease A. Basic Information 1. Causes a) Yellow Fever virus transferred by mosquitoes to humans b) Since 1974 only one genetic type can still be identified c) Transmitted between monkeys and mosquitoes and then from mosquitoes to humans. 2. Symptoms a) Incubates in body for 3-6 days before symptoms occur b) 2 disease phases (1) "acute"
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