Hello to all‚ I’m new here. Happened to stumble across this site when I was looking for tips on writing my common app essay. Would like to thank the moderators of this site. Anyway‚ this is my essay. Any comments/criticisms would be welcome thank you so much :) Evaluate a significant experience‚ achievement‚ risk you have taken‚ or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you. The sun was bearing down on us as we left the bus. As usual‚ we were early‚ perhaps even earlier today. It
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Analysis of a Relationship Friendships come and go but finding a best friend doesn’t always come so easily. It was in the middle of my second grade school year when I learned I would be transferring to a new school. Losing all of my friends‚ encountering new people in a different environment and having that nervous feeling in my stomach because I was starting all over didn’t seem to inviting. I found myself alone knowing not a soul. Shy and quiet would best describe me as a second grader. Of course
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“Friendship” When Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote out this essay‚ he was trying to be as direct‚ sophisticated‚ and blunt with how he felt about the word friendship. He wrote it in a way that anyone who was trying to read would understand‚ even if that person had to read it over and over again to try and understand the point he was making. Emerson focuses on the definition of friendship and why they are important and he uses many illusions to show certain visuals‚ he ends up writing his illusions so
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Thomas Park‚ Friendship Fountain was the largest and tallest fountain of its time. It was designed in 1963 by the architect Taylor Hardwick‚ and took two years of building up until the park opening in 1965 (Godwin). It was renamed in 1968‚ after the park’s finance commissioner Dallas Thomas was involved in scandals and indicted. It then became known as the “Friendship Fountain” at the suggestion of the members of the Rotary Club‚ whose club principles included strong friendship (“Friendship Fountain
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there for you when things aren’t going right and you need them the most. They are the only ones that are here to stay no matter the distance. Whether you are close or not to your family they’re still your family at the end of the day. Blood is thicker than water. Family comes first before anybody or anything. They are here when it seems like you have nobody. You are supposed to love your family unconditionally whether you are on good terms or not. These are the people you can count on when you need them
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The Value of Friendship Being gregarious by nature‚ men cannot live in isolation. Men therefore live in groups and build up lasting friendship‚ with many of their clase associates. That friendship with others makes our lives more pleasant and secure than without friends is not difficult to realise. Without friends we live in loneliness. We have little opportunity to learn from the personal experience‚ knowledge and wisdom of others. We also do not have the opportunity to express our feelings
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Essay Writing TOPIC: My Friend-My Guiding Line THESIS STATEMENT: True friends are hard to find and are an invaluable treasure. Friendship is the divine feeling and relationship between friends. Friendship is developed ultimately and requires to be maintained with care. One can not live without friends and real friendship could be a great support in one’s life. Friendship is simply a divine relationship based on
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How the World Began (Bukidnon Folktale) TIME LINE There was no world yet and there were gods living in a great brightness in a circular space Magbabaya‚ Dadanyahan and Makabughaw were the three gods who first lived in order and balance Makabughaw created the first wind. Magbabaya created the earth from the soil coming from Dadanyahan’s mouth but it was dry and colorless. Dadanyahan sprinkled his saliva and blessed by Magbabaya and it was the first rain. When water washed over the earth
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A wise man once said: “ The greatest journeys in life begin with the smallest steps.” My journey of a lifetime began with a small step through the gates of The Settlers High School and today it is that very step which proved to be my greatest and wisest‚ as it led me through the doors of an extra-ordinary school in which my great journey of self-discovery and self-development began. Greetings. Today I am faced with the hard task of delivering the most difficult speech I ever had to make‚ but
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reaching my doorstep‚ I heaved a heavy sigh of relieve and pleasure. At last‚ I have reached my long waited destination; home. My red‚ sticky palm reached out for the doorknob. I was about to set foot onto the cold shiny tiles when I heard a soft whimper coming from behind me. When I turned to look for the source of the sound‚ I felt something fury brush past my ankle. Looking down at the fury thing‚ I was rooted to the ground. Right there‚ looking back at me‚ was a beautiful gray kitten. I could not
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