PERSONAL STATEMENT Prompt #2: Tell us about a personal quality‚ talent‚ accomplishment‚ contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud‚ and how does it relate to the person you are? I’ve never been so interested in my spiritual life‚ my religion‚ and my service to others as I have been these past three years. One of the proudest moments of my life is when I was accepted into my school’s LIFE team‚ which stands for Living in Faith
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Tell us about a personal quality‚ talent‚ accomplishment‚ contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are? Clean final corrected edit: A personal accomplishment that I am proud of is becoming the captain of my school’s volleyball team. I began playing volleyball my sophomore year. At first‚ I joined just because my friends were on the team‚ but soon volleyball became my passion. I worked
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Tell us about a personal quality‚ talent‚ accomplishment‚ contribution or experience that is important to you Everything happening felt unreal. I didn’t even realize it was time. It ten minutes until we started. Everyone was straight in their lines and nerves began to take over. We were all less than five minutes away from marching in the 124th Annual Pasadena Tournament of the Roses Parade. My mind was racing and all I could think was‚ ‘I better not trip and fall. This is going to be live on national
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UC Prompt #1 (648 words) I never really paid much attention to the kid in the mirror until I was in the sixth grade. On that day‚ he came to me crying‚ uttering words of apology between each sob‚ his hand clenched in a tight fist‚ his knuckles blood red. I assumed that the blood must have been from someone else; otherwise he wouldn’t be apologizing. I did my best to comfort him‚ consoling him whenever I could. He immediately became attached to me and promised me another visit soon. The second
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influenced you" is the opening phrase of several personal statement prompts that go on to ask that you provide details of what that influence was. The major mistake made in these personal statement essays is that candidates make the essay about the individual and that individual’s achievements and character‚ which is all fine‚ but not if it is at the expense of detailing how that person has influenced you. The other mistake candidates make in response to this prompt is that they answer with the intuitive "first
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Prompt 1: Describe the world you come from — for example‚ your family‚ community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. The school that I come from‚ Campolindo High School‚ is one of the best high schools in the state. We were often told to not be worried about getting what we believe to be bad grades in the harder classes that we take because getting a B or sometimes even a C is equivalent to get an A in most other high schools. We have been told throughout
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Personal Statement Prompt #1 Each factor of life‚ since the moment of birth‚ shapes the way we are now and effects many people around us. These factors can vary from being born into poverty‚ being born with everything served on a silver platter‚ or being born with some sort of disorder. Everyone’s occurrences are never the same as anothers. In my case‚ I was born in Santa Ana California to a 17 year old mother and a lot 19 year old father who was somewhere in the world serving for the United States
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Tell us about a talent‚ experience‚ contribution or personal quality you will bring to the University of California. In school‚ I have enjoyed learning sciences especially when the topics are related to human conditions. Ever since learning about general biology in my junior high school years ago‚ I have on my own taken additional anthropology‚ psychology‚ anatomy and chemistry classes from a local college for further enrichment and have grown very fond of learning the complexity in human machinery
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conclusion that I am applying to UC Davis. UC Davis has caught my attention since it is renowned as one of the best Universities in California and the commute is only a 35-minute drive from where I live. After further research‚ I have also learned that UC Davis is one of the most ethnically diverse colleges in America‚ which is an important factor to me‚ as a person of color. Furthermore‚ I am deeply interested in majoring in Biological Sciences and I have read that UC Davis has a strong STEM program
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College Application Essay Prompt #2 Vigorously shaking‚ profusely sweating‚ and nervously _____– I could barely grasp the note cards in my hands while 30 sets of eyes were glued on me. Preparing to do the unthinkable – speak in front of a crowd of judgmental peers – I constantly doubted myself‚ bringing my self-confidence down to its all-time low in a matter of seconds. As nine years of skills learned through speech impairment classes suddenly vanished‚ the teacher announced my name‚ signaling
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