and me in many ways. The peer editing comments help me know what to change in my writing. When I read and hear other classmate’s essays and journals it gives a lot of information that I didn’t even know. When peer editing‚ it helps me understand what people think about my writing and how they think I can make it better. The comments that are given to me by the editor tells me what to change. Also when you peer edit‚ the editor tells you what grammar or spelling mistake you have made‚ so you can change
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I observed people from my work place and my school‚ I have three persons who would be perfect example for my three grade thinkers. The first person I would like to begin with is one of my coworker. Her name is Nicole. As I was working with her for almost one year‚ she seems nice and thoughtful assistant manager that everyone would like to have. However‚ she has one rule for everyone in the store that everything has to be organized under her own way in the store. For example‚ if we fold a paper
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Lonely Mountain from the greedy dragon Smaug. Many forms of literary elements appear in this book such as conflict‚ character archetypes‚ artifacts of attraction‚ and deus ex machina.. These elements work together to create a detailed fantasy world which many people enjoy. The main theme of this book is an “everyman” (Bilbo) can develop into a hero when he is thrust into extraordinary circumstances. The first literary element I am going to talk about is conflict. There are many forms of conflict
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Leisure The idea of leisure has been in existence for many centuries and has come to have many different meanings depending on the period in history or the civilization that it originated from. From as early as Ancient Greece‚ Rome or Babylonia‚ the term we now know as leisure has existed in some form or another. As has been widely noted in introductory recreation texts‚ schole was both the ancient Greek word for leisure meaning‚ “serious activity without the pressure of necessity” and is
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behind Basketball Basketball has been a part of my life since I was the tender age of 5. Ever since the day my dad put that round leather sphere into my hands I haven’t been able to get enough of it. To me basketball isn’t just a sport‚ but an outlet from schoolwork‚ a basis of enjoyment‚ a place where I can socialize and obviously a source of exercise. Anytime I start to feel the stress of school and work‚ I always have basketball as my way of winding down. The moment I step out onto the concrete
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Reaction Paper World Literature CRUZ‚ Ross Christien L. 1ChE-D Ma’am Luisa Gomez December 15‚ 2012 Last December 9‚ we went to Aliw Theater to watch the play “Sinderela”. The show started at 3:00pm. Before the real play started‚ there was some introductory play that was held. There were some ballet dancers and some foreign musicians that kept the audience entertained. I found it very interesting because they have been moving in sync‚ all at the same time. It lasted for 1 hour
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in pain which can be quite gruesome and at times as serious as acute depression or a nervous breakdown. It becomes extremely important to think and ponder over the ones you are eager to give away your heart to. For once we all need to ask ourselves whether it is really worth it. And I am sure your heart
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The play being discussed in this critique will be Metamorphoses written and originally directed by Mary Zimmerman. The URI Theatre department produced its own version directed by Steven Raider-Ginsburg. It was performed between the dates of February 21-March 3‚ 2013. Costume design was by David T Howard‚ Scene design by Patrick Lynch. Lighting design was handled by Christian Wittwer and Sound design was by Michael Hyde. This production shows students continuing their development as actors thru the
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I. Introduction The playgrounds at elementary schools are the first place where children begin to develop their social skills. Playgrounds not provide a sanctuary and are the first place where children learn to deal with other people‚ but allow children to learn valuable social skills. Playgrounds also provide a location where numerous young friendships are started. Athletic facilities‚ not only can new‚ or renovated fields‚ stadiums‚ or gyms bolster community spirit‚ but they offer spaces for
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When you’re angry‚ you can lose control over your mind‚ and become violent. You can destroy things with a few words which may have taken years to form. Anger is caused by pride and stubbornness. Betraying secrets- When you are entrusted with something important and you disclose it to someone else. “He who keeps no pledge has no religion.” – Prophet Muhammad (saww) Brotherhood and unity- Example of one makkan and one madinite brother thingy. What one person does affects the others in a community
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