3213 Midterm Spring 2013 Name: Yanelys Rodriguez 5 pts. each: Rewrite (don’t just scratch out) the following sentences for more effective prose: active sentences‚ parallel structures‚ concision‚ You-centered tone‚ non-biased lang.‚ positivity‚ etc. 1. We cannot ship your merchandise until we receive your check. Unfortunately merchandise cannot be shipped until payment is received. 2. Failure to follow the directions may cause the blender to malfunction
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The lake’s liquid is bright yellow and somehow glittering. The scent is seducing; mildly bittersweet with a hint of barley‚ malt and hops. Carlo is tranced as he walks slowly towards the lake. The water’s level is at his waist; he slowly lowers his head ‚ sipping a bit. Carlo likes it. Carlo likes it a lot! The sweet earthy herbal taste gradually elicits ecstacy. The brew is thick‚ rich‚ with floral and grapefruit notes. He can sense a slight sourness and mysterious enchanting undertone
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has brought about some of the most revolutionary‚ world-altering inventions the world has ever seen. On the other hand‚ it has also been the downfall of great leaders and societies who reached too high. In Mary Shelley’s classic novel Frankenstein‚ Victor Frankenstein is a man who finds that ambition has taken him and those that he cares about down a deadly path‚ yet still refuses to admit defeat. His ultimate end is brought on by unchecked ambition designed to benefit only his own ego. Even
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An Overview of Mobile WiMAX (IEEE802.16e-2005) Technology Abstract The increasing demands for high-speed mobile Internet access over the past few years have motivated the development of broadband wireless access technologies. Mobile WiMAX (based on IEEE 802.16e-2005 standard) provides a solution to meet the demands. This paper will present a high-level overview of the development of Mobile WiMAX and the key technologies involved in Mobile WiMAX. This paper will also address the future development
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Carolyn Isherwood‚ ID #21108433 Exam 05002400 1478 Angelus Hill Road‚ Hemet‚ CA 92545 isherwoo@fusion.gat.com Phoenix Advertising 112 South Front Street Charlotte‚ NC 12345-6789 January 31‚ 2011 Gregory S. Forest‚ President Phoenix Advertising 112 South Front Street Charlotte‚ NC 12345-6789 Dear Mr. Forest: Until the 4th quarter of 2010 the Roanoke branch had consistently ranked in the top 90th percentile with regards to productivity. They have received numerous coveted awards including “Most Innovated
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Government schemes regarding the environment‚ heritage and federal legislation on human rights. He had created himself a legacy which lived on throughout the late years of his life and‚ although he passed away October 2014‚ his contributions will be imprinted
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Table of Contents Capstone Proposal Summary .............................................................................................................. 1 Review of Other Work .......................................................................................................................... 4 Rationale and Systems Analysis ......................................................................................................... 6 Goals and Objectives ...............................
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In addition‚ one of the most transcendental writers of Romantic period was Victor Hugo. He born in France in 1802‚ He studies laws but he decided to quit his job and became a writer. (Editors)Among of his works we can find “ Les Misérables” where he describes the society behavior after the French Revolution‚ also he wrote about
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5. Victor Jara constantly sung about united people. He sung about a lot of struggles Chileans face living in Chile. For Example in one of his songs “ I Remember Amanda” he sings about a girl name Amanda and losing her loved one to the mountains. Many people did not return to the factory. In Eduardo Galeano and Isabel Allende they discuss Latin America as a region that is placed for others to constantly use to their benefit. In the song El Aparecido‚ it talks about having been crucified. I believe
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Sheque Philbert Contribution of Egypt Civilization GEHS 4020 The Ancient Egyptian civilization is the oldest and most influential world civilization. Egypt contribution to human knowledge‚ invention‚ and scientific discoveries surpasses any other country including Mesopotamia‚ India and China. Ancient Egyptians were the first to invent and use glass‚ linen‚ paper and ink. They invented the calendar‚ clock‚ Geometry and the alphabet. They were
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